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And So We Fished

We climbed the gate while it was dark So no one saw us in the park We’d leave at eight and we’d be fine For ‘Mr Keys’ would come at nine This garden where the roses grew In memory of people who Wouldn’t mind that we were there For where we trod, we trod with care Not too much gear, we travelled light No lamps to show up in the night We had a place where we would sit Until things brightened up a bit Of brick and tin, with seats within Its open face, a welcome grin The shelter offered lakeside views For those bereaved to sit and muse And gazing out on yonder lake In no rush for the day to break It watched the mist sit dense and white On waters that still clung to night But as the moon took to its pillow Something splashed beneath the willow Newly crowned the sun took hold To warm two lads who’d braved the cold And in that dawning day we wished For fish to feed… and so we fished With bread or maggots, worms or cheese To lure the carp from under trees We caught one never, not once ever We tried our best but carp are clever They proved a never ending wait But perch and roach would take our bait And so we fished for what would bite And every fish was pure delight For every fish was surreptitious Which made the fishing more delicious Our voices low to show respect The silence as I recollect Was broken when the ducks went daft Which sounded like the whole lot laughed Then in the now increasing light A few of them began to fight A precursor, perhaps, to breeding We didn’t care… the fish were feeding And of the fish that we caught there A tiddler was extremely rare Though some were bigger than the rest And sometimes, one, a personal best But when the time had passed us by With Mr Keys’ arrival nigh Reluctantly we’d sneak away No sign that we’d been there that day * How often have I reminisced Of two good friends and where we fished And of the people buried there And how they didn’t seem to care

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Date: 3/3/2025 11:45:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem about you and you mates fishing - its a long while since I saw the word 'Daft' used , my dad was from from Leeds Yorkshire and used the word, made me very nostalgic and sentimental. Keep well my friend, blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 3/2/2025 4:24:00 PM
Wow. This is amazing poetry. Gotta fave it
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/2/2025 4:29:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Fifty one years gone by… seems like no time at all. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the fave. Terry
Date: 3/1/2025 8:35:00 AM
Terry, you may no longer have long golden locks, but your memories are still intact, and you've beautifully written them for those of us who read you to feel as if we were fishing with you and your childhood friend. Simple days should hold good memories like yours. Love your gentle serious side and I'm glad you're writing that way along with your humor. Great weekend for you, I hope.
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/1/2025 11:21:00 AM
Thanks, Lin. All of that, entirely true, happened 50 years ago. I live a hundred miles south of there now, but still see that mate whenever Sparks are performing in the UK. You will have read the full version of this (before I deleted the epilogue). I doubt I ever would have seen the place in the flesh again and, having found its ‘ruins’ on Google Earth, that’s a lucky break. Glad you enjoyed my trip back in time.
Date: 3/1/2025 8:33:00 AM
a masterpiece, terry! i love the way you've captured this memory in perfect rhyme and rhythm (of course!), making it so easy to visualize. the mood is magical. in my humble opinion, you didn't even need the epilogue, although it was interesting having some of your memories upended - i think it's more powerful ending where you did before that. i love the final verse starting with "How often have I reminisced..."
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Terry Flood
Date: 3/1/2025 11:03:00 AM
I actually agree 100% Ilene. I first started this some months ago and put it down. Kept coming back to it and, yes, the pre epilogue ending worked best. In fact, you’ve pretty much made my mind up (as I was in two minds about the epilogue). So EXECUTIVE DECISION… the epilogue is history. Thanks for your creative guidance ;-) Terry

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