alone, I see

alone, I see a universe of stars even more

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2024 9:32:00 AM

Going way back and found this haiku gem!

Robert Schatz
Date: 4/12/2024 9:12:00 PM

Think I used the wrong box before; didn't exactly reply. Ahhhhh Thank you Andrea...

Arastu Goyal

Date: 1/6/2024 8:28:00 PM

Enjoyable haiku, nice work

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/7/2024 1:15:00 AM

Thank you Arastu!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/6/2024 4:49:00 PM

That's a realistic view of stars and vibrant too.

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/6/2024 5:07:00 PM

Thank you Hilda!

Tom Woody

Date: 1/6/2024 4:43:00 PM

And a beautiful cosmos it be lad. Aye. Nice haiku. You're getting good at these

Robert Schatz
Date: 1/6/2024 5:06:00 PM

Thank you Tom. I always appreciate and take seriously your feedback. I've been really working on haiku the last few days. Just learned about senryu last night. I'm glad it's a legit form.