Almost Time

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I once had a wish But now it's long gone I realize now That I'd rather move on In my life, I would try to endeavor Things I can do To live life forever As the years passed by, And now that I'm old I oft wonder 'Bout some things I've been told Twas told we die And go up to heaven Well, guess I'll know soon, I'm ninety-seven I've outlived so many... Family and friends Now what I wish for Is that my life ends

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/13/2025 8:28:00 PM

97, eh? Feh. You don't look a day over 95.8, Charlie. lol... I know, I know. It's not about you. ~ 98.6

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/29/2024 2:02:00 AM

Keep going, I was nearly taken in until I read the comments, I thought my god he looks well for 97 lol. Sorry to hear about your friend. Happy New year to you and your family Charlie.

Charles Messina
Date: 12/29/2024 2:29:00 AM

Hey Tom, yeah I still have along time to go before I reach that ripe age. If I looked that good at 97 I might have lived to 150 LOL Thanks so much for mentioning my friend Tommy that just passed. He was a long-time pal. Hope you are well my dear friend. You too are as genuine as the gold. With love, brother Tom. Charlie

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 12/28/2024 10:33:00 AM

Wow Charlie, your soul is flourishing through your poetry, don't wish to leave! How inspirational your poem is to us who feel the age and pains creeping up and stealing from us...and we find we are rather young to a spry 97, wow. Have a healthy and happy 2025, 2026. 2027, 2028 and many more. Why not? You are still inspiring others, like me right now, bemoaning my own years, and goodness, you turned on a light in my heart. Maybe life isn't done with me yet, gives me hope!

Charles Messina
Date: 12/29/2024 2:33:00 AM

My dear friend, BJ. My soul is flourishing with gratitude right now. But I have to be honest, when I wrote this I was thinking about the elderly people and how some of them probably feel. I am not that quite old yet, in fact, I just turned 65 (lol). But I do appreciate your very kind words. I hope you have a wonderful and Healthy New Year and many more. Sending love, Charlie x

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2024 5:53:00 AM

i hope not my friend... I hope you live healthily for a long time... We cant predict our death nor do we know who will go before us... we just need to live our lives.. Deep and emotive poem my friend.. I hope you have a wonderful 2025..

Charles Messina
Date: 12/28/2024 6:56:00 PM

You are one of the best, brother SO! Thank you...and I do ever wish the same on you. Strange, one of my dear friends passed this morning. A High School buddy that I've been friends for for quite some time. A fine musician and father of three suddenly had an heart-attach. Just never know when someone is going to go. Love ya, bro...thanks for the uplifting words.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/28/2024 5:49:00 AM

Oh my goodness Charlie don't wish it too soon - I didn't realise you were of such an amazing age - I love reading your poetry and hope you are here for a good while longer.! I know this time of year can be especially hard with so many loved ones no longer here so we are truly blessed to have your thoughts. hugs jan xx

Charles Messina
Date: 12/28/2024 6:49:00 PM

Jan, I was putting my mind-set into the thoughts of the elderly when I wrote this. I still have 32 years to live until I reach that amazing year of 97 (lol) Hopefully I live quite a bit longer because I hope to read more of your wonderful poetry as well.This was fictional...(lol) Love ya, Hugs Charlie