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Allow Me Time To Reminisce

Allow me time to reminisce On the glow of the perfect kiss Leading to life’s peaceful bliss, An emotion I don’t want to miss So much more delightful than a hiss, Or, those insults from a nasty diss. You see because I had an older sis I learned to sit to take a…you got this!
Written September 30, 2022 [from a few moments of silly musing on rhymes for "this."]

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Date: 10/1/2022 10:56:00 AM
LOL. My step-dad was raised by two old maid aunts. I know what you're saying! Linda
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/1/2022 11:28:00 AM
I'm glad you got a laugh out of this little ditty, Linda.
Date: 10/1/2022 10:06:00 AM
haha Did sis give ya a little lesson? Or did you watch her outside your window? My sisters watched me kissing a guy outside their bedroom window one night. Oh, the joys of being the eldest sister.
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Date: 10/1/2022 11:30:00 AM
Actually, truthfully, Andrea, it just simply rhymed, and I had nowhere else to go with it! Thanks, though. I can't ever recall watching my sis in that situation, although I wouldn't have put it passed me.
Date: 9/30/2022 3:05:00 PM
Ha, ha! Pretty good for just 'piddlin' around!' Laughter and Levity, Gershon
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/1/2022 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, gw. Sometimes I write such utter garbage!
Date: 9/30/2022 10:49:00 AM
Delightful insight Milton. I hope your family did well with the storm in the Pan handle and Port St Lucie. My brother Gus said it was windy in Port St lucie but it wasn't as bad as the coast...
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Date: 9/30/2022 11:11:00 AM
Thanks, Michael. I'm glad it wasn't so bad in that area. My nieces have notified me they are okay and no damage. Although a friend's parents' home in Ft. Myers had considerable damage to their carport and roof.
Date: 9/30/2022 10:12:00 AM
"This" is fun Milt! Thanks for the giggle and "this" fun. Happy future musings!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/30/2022 11:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sam. I was just piddlin'.
Date: 9/30/2022 9:55:00 AM
Lovely delicate monorhyme with sentiments that I know move you Hank!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/30/2022 11:12:00 AM
Thanks, Caren. I was just playing around with this one.

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