All Alone

a lonesome hermit scours the beach for a new shell no longer homeless Rual's 'Journey' Haiku

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2010 7:40:00 AM

Great take on the photo, Margaret! Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2010 5:03:00 PM

Good one, Marg. Congratulations. Geeez, I think I really screwed up with this one. I didn't know if it was a snail or some kind of crab type animal. It seemed to have so many arms in the picture but the winning poem called it a snail. Luv, Andrea

Date: 4/24/2010 4:22:00 PM

Awesome perspective on the picture for a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on your third place finish in Raul's contest. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Mitch White

Date: 4/24/2010 2:08:00 PM

Happy snail Congrats on your win Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/24/2010 1:39:00 PM

Congrats Margaret on your third place win in the Journey contest.. perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/24/2010 1:36:00 PM

Wonderful, Maggie!! Congratulations on yor 2nd Place win in The Journey Contest!! Thanks for leaving kind comments for me...Love, Audrey

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/24/2010 1:27:00 PM

Margaret, congratulations on placing 3rd in my contest...Raul

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/24/2010 8:35:00 AM

Great work. Good luck in contest. I have been away a few days and contests have been launched and over in just that time. I am playing catch up. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2010 4:50:00 AM

if we look we will find, nice one