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Aha Life a Reverberating Harp

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life is a chessboard, with kings, queens, and bishops, knights, soldiers, charioteers... multifarious maneuvering to find their rightful place, and winning is a complex race. life is a lens in the camera, capturing moments of exhilaration, euphoria, exuberance... supple memories are all held close to heart…flashbacks startle, images don’t fade away when sun sets with scarlet hues at falling dusk life is a delicate ethereal harp with reverberating resonant strings, Aha! to pluck them, to stroke them with gentle fingers ...dainty touch to create a celestial song of love life is not too many words, but a few spoken with fervor… a caress, a glance, an unannounced promise… a heart unknowingly given away. life is a rainbow, all swirling colours of the horizon woven together, luminous, transient, fleeting.. quivering dewdrops on lotus leaves, life is a meandering stream, flowing through rocky rugged pebbles, a choppy ridged course... Oh Ocean the ultimate destination! June 28, 2021 "Life Is" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron Flores A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest SEVENTH PLACE

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/8/2022 5:20:00 PM

Congratulations on the win, Mala. This magical poem certainly deserves it. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2022 4:35:00 PM

Dear Bill, Thank you so much for the precious comments. I feel fortunate to deserve your kind support.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2022 10:34:00 AM

Big congrats with your win in Brian's contest. Wonderful analogies you made.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2022 4:34:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Andrea. Your comments are precious - it’s a gift!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/29/2022 11:48:00 PM

Very beautiful and poetical reflections on life. Written in a very solemn and classical manner. Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2022 4:33:00 PM

Thank you, Alex. Your comments are highly appreciated. It is so great to have you as my poet-friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/29/2022 4:56:00 PM

That it is! You have captured some of the nuances of life! Congratulations, Mala!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2022 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Your comments inspire me, Dear Friend.

Valsa George

Date: 6/29/2022 9:13:00 AM

Your highly artistic mind has weaved beautiful yarns of imaginnation. All the analogies used are highly impressive especally the concluding stanza where life is compared to a rainbow. This has secured a creditable win and is heading for another win...I am almost sure. Congratulations, Mala !

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/9/2022 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa, for your support and thoughtful words. I am so grateful to find you, a gifted poet, and the kindest, warmest, loveliest human being, as my friend. Truly appreciate your precious comments, which inspire me. Love and best wishes ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/28/2022 10:22:00 AM

A lovely write and picture. Life is all of this and much more. Maybe a part 2..... Have a blessed day................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/28/2022 10:37:00 AM

You are right, Paula. Life is all these, and so much more! Your suggestion is fantastic - a Part 2. I was already thinking about so many other metaphors...but stopped including...too long for readers! Thank you for valuable comments.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 6/28/2022 8:47:00 AM

Flowing metaphors of life, thoughtfully woven. Best wishes.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/28/2022 10:21:00 AM

Thank you, Subimal. How kind of you to read and comment on my poem! Really appreciate!