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ADVENTURE PILL: JILL AND BILL

Jill and Bill glide on the rill, Bubbling with thrills, Embracing the chills, Past serene hills. Patiently yearning for gills, Jill—with her bait and skills— Fills her spirit with a frill, As tranquil waters lie still. With each catch, a hidden drill, Bill, overjoyed, concerns distill. Moonlit eve; savor the grill— Jill and Bill, relish nature's will.

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Date: 11/22/2024 11:26:00 AM
Congrats, poet.
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Jeta Buch
Date: 11/22/2024 11:53:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/18/2024 3:19:00 AM
Wow, love the rhyming, Jeta!
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Jeta Buch
Date: 11/22/2024 11:54:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/18/2024 2:03:00 AM
Great rhyming with this one, Jeta. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest! Charlie
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Jeta Buch
Date: 11/22/2024 11:53:00 PM
Thank you! It came across as a pleasant surprise.

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