Act of Kindness Blessed

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fulfillment of praise sweet harvest fruit it renders flipping sour tongue spoils 11/7/2017

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Muhammad Imtiaz

Date: 2/24/2018 12:16:00 PM

Hi Eve , the word of kindness bears sweet fruits and sour tongue spoils .... well said

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2017 3:14:00 PM

Yes, for sure, Eve. the sour tongue is quite the spoiler!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/7/2017 9:43:00 PM

Eileen said it so well! Great poem Eve.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/7/2017 2:53:00 PM

How much better to praise than censure. Lovely thought, dear.

Silent One

Date: 11/7/2017 2:14:00 PM

Indeed so true... We all need to control our tongues at times... Great senryu..

Elaine George

Date: 11/7/2017 1:33:00 PM

So true, Eve. Elaine

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2017 1:16:00 PM

Act of kindness--I see the flip in the picture!