Get Your Premium Membership

Abyss

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Tom Woody.


                      

In deepest, darkest depths of my despair I find myself without a saving grace. A pendulum of pain prevents my prayer from rising upward through the dead of space. Within these walls a war where no one wins repeats itself just like a worn-out rhyme. No swain should e’er succumb to swinish sins, for he who does the crime must do the time. And yet there was a time I loved her true, and in those days we dreamt without restraint. These merry memories now make me rue a life I should have lived with more constraint. For now, I dwell inside this cursed abyss, a captive soul who longs for heaven's bliss. * This English sonnet was accepted and published in the journal, Society of Classical Poetry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 12/3/2024 1:32:00 PM
Gosh have I read about everything you have written by now? Anyway, this is beautifully written. You have a good grasp of the sonnet meter. Nicely done
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 12/3/2024 1:37:00 PM
Haha I just don't write much. Tried to write for Inky's breathe contest but it wouldn't come. Haven't felt motivated. Thx
Date: 12/23/2023 12:43:00 PM
Beautiful piece of work, sir!
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 12/23/2023 1:35:00 PM
Thx much. Pretty happy with this one
Date: 10/17/2023 7:55:00 AM
A captive soul ... how well many know.Beautiful and I long for Paradise, and it's heavenly bliss. Beautiful
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 11/12/2023 2:57:00 PM
Me too Barbara
Date: 10/15/2023 9:05:00 AM
Your words drip atmosphere. An excellent read. Cheers - Gary
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 11/12/2023 2:56:00 PM
Much thx Gary
Date: 10/9/2023 8:18:00 AM
Dear Tom, your English sonnet is rich with deep-reaching emotion expressed in lovely lilting meter. I adore dark sonnets and admire your poetic skill and artistry in creating this captivating piece. Congratulations for your poem's publication. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 10/9/2023 8:21:00 AM
Much thx you input means a ton to me
Date: 9/20/2023 9:09:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this, the sonnet fits perfectly with the image. -AG
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 9/20/2023 9:37:00 AM
Thank you. I always enjoy a well chosen supplement photo
Date: 9/4/2023 9:40:00 AM
Masterfully done to perfection. Classical in simplicity and depth of content!
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 9/9/2023 10:35:00 AM
Thx so much Frances
Date: 9/2/2023 6:05:00 AM
love this, Tom, and thanks for reading miine. xx
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 9/2/2023 6:06:00 AM
Yes, it was my pleasure
Date: 8/23/2023 8:04:00 AM
I love the alliteration throughout and the strong emotion conveyed. I can see why this masterpiece got published!
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/23/2023 9:43:00 AM
Appreciated Juliet
Date: 8/23/2023 7:31:00 AM
Tom, what a lovely, moving sonnet you have penned! Janice
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/23/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 8/17/2023 12:25:00 PM
Well written. Powerful! Congratulations :)
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/17/2023 12:31:00 PM
Much thx Heidi
Date: 8/15/2023 2:37:00 PM
A powerful write/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/15/2023 2:45:00 PM
U2 Paula
Date: 8/15/2023 12:43:00 PM
Wow congratulations on getting published. And well you write sonnets just effortlessly. Those alliterations flow so seamlessly and the depth of this write is impeccable. “ pendulum of pain prevents my prayer” i love that! Pendulum of pain is so creative and the rhymes here used are unique! Intriguing write and reality we all see but sometimes not talk about we’ll delivered kingy
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/15/2023 12:58:00 PM
Much thanks Inky. Most of what I've posted so far is stuff you've seen before but I appreciate the generous compliment
Date: 8/14/2023 9:04:00 PM
Repentance and confession.... ! What is done cannot be undone. Still you can build on what is destroyed with saving grace. A beautiful sonnet ! Congratulations on your recognition, Tom.
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/15/2023 5:17:00 AM
Much thx Valsa for reading
Date: 8/14/2023 10:50:00 AM
Congrats on your accomplishment and recognition! - Gail
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/14/2023 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Gail
Date: 8/13/2023 11:42:00 AM
Truly superb. Cheers - Gary
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/13/2023 11:44:00 AM
Danke
Date: 8/12/2023 3:41:00 PM
A truly masterful English sonnet, dear Tom. Sonnets are one of my favorite genres of poetry.
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 4:08:00 PM
There's Elaine. Much appreciated
Date: 8/12/2023 3:18:00 PM
To write like this requires one to analyze every word, every rhyme to the nth degree. The obsession to achieve perfection can drive you crazy - and knowing its always just out of reach can drive you mad. But, that’s what it takes. Well done Tom.
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 3:25:00 PM
Well, now that the two masters have given their approval I can rest in peace. Much appreciated Mark
Date: 8/12/2023 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on having this piece published. Thanks as well for your visit and comment.
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 2:40:00 PM
Yessir
Date: 8/12/2023 11:50:00 AM
My friend, this is certainly a top notch sonnet! Great flow and superb rhyming skills. A most definite fav for me. God bless..
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 11:55:00 AM
I know you're a sonnet lover. Thx robert
Date: 8/12/2023 10:31:00 AM
First rate, Tom. Both enjoyable and moving.
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 11:54:00 AM
Thx Jim
Date: 8/12/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thomas, magnifique! Even down to the volta -- you nailed it! Funny, in an artistic way, I often have an issue with the word memories (which is perfect here) but some readers including myself and, as I alluded, struggle with when I include it, because of vernacular pronunciation and, consequently, have used it before as a two-syllable word as well...(mem-ries). Your use here is totally correct but to those reading, it's a nod to vernacular, which certainly plays with our perception---great write!
Login to Reply
Cornish Avatar
Craig Cornish
Date: 8/12/2023 12:35:00 PM
So true Tom & thanks but you're your own master now & I love it! As far as pronunciations, we can use either, the syllable snobs ignore the content while praising their (im)perfection - so what's new?
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 10:11:00 AM
Btw, same with the word prayer. It can be pronounced as one syllable or two. Either way is acceptable and allows for flexibility
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 10:09:00 AM
I couldn't have written it without your early mentoring and example. Thx much
Date: 8/11/2023 6:06:00 PM
Indeed, a masterful opus it is. Exuding an air of exquisiteness interwoven with a touch of extraordinary artistry, unquestionably exceptional! Tom, you have crafted a sonnet that evokes a sense of melancholy, yet possesses a remarkable beauty.
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/12/2023 9:58:00 AM
It's not my favorite of my sonnets, but it seems to work reasonably well. Thx sotto
Date: 8/11/2023 5:46:00 PM
A melancholy, yet beautiful sonnet, Tom. Warmest congratulations on its publication.
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/11/2023 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn. It's one of my favorite forms
Date: 8/11/2023 4:40:00 PM
Pray not in vain! I liked your sonnet! :)
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 8/11/2023 4:42:00 PM
He's in too much pain even to pray for forgiveness, but maybe there's hope
12

Book: Reflection on the Important Things