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Abracadabra - It's Magical- Collaboration

A picturesque scene from my window this afternoon. Banishing all greying clouds, the sky is pastel blue. Radiating the sun's rays, rain was not seen for days. Astonishing vibrant rainbow of flowers are strewn. Clusters of marigolds, daffodils and lilies grow. A glorious image appears in the far lagoon. Delicate swans are gliding in the sparkling waters. Adorable signets will be completely grown soon. Bewitching aromas from where the white jasmine grew. Rain was not seen for days, radiating the sun's rays. Alluring sunset drenches all crimson, by the moon.

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Ink Empress

Date: 8/16/2024 10:08:00 PM

This is a very clever and creative take one that not many thought of doing! Congratulations on your top placement! Well deserved! Wishing you a speedy recovery. What i love about this poem is the gorgeous imagery and flow of words! Just beautiful. Sending you both light!

Ink Empress
Date: 8/17/2024 2:49:00 AM

Thats so sweet and makes me happy dear sv! I didnt know your husband is a poet too just like you and he has a way of painting with words. This one is a fave for me!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/17/2024 12:06:00 AM

Thanks so much Empress. He isnt one to comment in the space provided but in the past, has told me of poems of yours that he has read and liked.

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/16/2024 9:20:00 AM

Prayers for your health and praise for this amazing write full of difficult form and lovely poetry! Xoxo

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/16/2024 6:55:00 PM

Sincere thanks.

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/15/2024 2:46:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your trophy win, Merv! I love you guys

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/15/2024 8:30:00 PM

We luv you too lovely lady.

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/15/2024 1:17:00 PM

Congratulations Merv! Your poem placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. This format was difficult, and the quality of the poems entered was outstanding, but yours rose to the top. You should be proud of your work; it is a wonderful example of this form of poetry (with an acoustic as a bonus). Very well done, my friend Emile.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 8/15/2024 8:29:00 PM

On behalf of Merv ( who is improving every day) and myself I thank you so much Emile. Merv insisted our poem had to spell Abracadabra. I typed it but he was definitely the mastermind behind it. He is stoked with his trophy.

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/21/2024 8:31:00 PM

A magical collaboration indeed dear poet. Best Wishes and Prayers while you are on the mend. God speed ~I Am Anaya

Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/22/2024 6:21:00 PM

Luv you Anaya, Wen.

Merv Hold

Date: 7/21/2024 4:47:00 PM

It takes two - A collaboration with my wife........ 13 syllables per line. ( 4 weeks ago Merv suffered a stroke, and is just regaining his speech, Your prayers are welcomed).