A Writhing Within

a writhing within the winds blow ever greater pounding hurricane Russell Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/12/2012 8:16:00 PM

Heya Russell,...It is as tho' u are describing the EYE of the storm...am I right?...what powerful terminology to accompany your theme. Haiku is NOT my strong suit however, I keep chippin' away at them. You are correct in my haiku entry that IT WAS about the baby discovered after Indiana's horrid storms...I wrote the haiku from the perspective of the "moment" that she was found. I know the outcome was sad but I tried to capture the feelings when she was found...the hope that was there BRIEFLY. Glad one person could "feel" that energy with me! All the best. Not able to write as much these days...Hugs, Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2012 6:36:00 AM

Wow, scary piece, my friend

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/11/2012 1:50:00 AM

wonderful haiku...a great honor to read...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2012 1:02:00 AM

Very good one, Russell. I see it's the one you gave me in the comment box! I used a certain scheme with mine: air/water/fire/earth. the four elements. I hope it was ok to do four!!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/10/2012 11:59:00 PM

Very good haiku here Russell.Best wishes if for a contest.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/10/2012 11:43:00 PM

a knock-out, russell!... the sound of your piece creates a booming sense of imagery !.. love this with thumps-up for a win!.. thanks for appreciating my work in your contest...:) huggs!

Tracy Edwards

Date: 3/10/2012 10:10:00 PM

Sounds a bit like my head at the minute Russell..Cool write my friend xxx Hugs