A Wall Between

Loves call awaits me Or perhaps it is knocking What if I answer Once opened finding no one Only a wall between us

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 10:43:00 PM

oh, wow, I could SEE the wall as I got to the end of this one. Love it.

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/23/2011 12:43:00 PM

Smile ~ Such amissfulness in regards unto, "Your Beauty;" please forgive myself and, I love this beautiful painting my dear; sooo lovely and of course, "A Beautiful Fave; 'Just Like You!!!'" ~ love, Always, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum

Date: 2/23/2011 12:30:00 PM

Smile ~ I do not believe that there could Ever be but a wall between, "Sooo Much Beauty As, 'Your Beautiful Self' &, The Heart That Loves 'Your Sweeetness My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Lovely Sharon Ruebel!!!'" ~ I Am regretful for having taken so long to return a humbled reply unto, "Your Majestic Light," in regards to SoupMail but, I cannot access its moment my dear yet, this is no excuse so, I Am sorry for ~ cont:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/21/2011 8:22:00 PM

Love always conquers all, dear Sha. Sometimes it takes a little longer but it does. Love, Annalise

Kash Poet

Date: 2/21/2011 6:03:00 PM

If that call is genuine the wall will crumble itself,Sharon.Nice Tanka you have penned here.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.----kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/21/2011 4:46:00 PM

beautiful thought well expressed with images, very visual, shar

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/21/2011 3:44:00 PM

Miss Ruebel !Tear down that wall!''' ;) nice poem Sharon

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/21/2011 2:44:00 PM

This is a decently written tanka. You have posed an intriguing question here.