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A Valentine Limerick

You ripped my heart out of my chest, while standing there laughing with jest, but I am a lover, and have found another, now her feathers lay in your nest.
Contest A valentine Limerick~ to your x-lover the heart-breaker
M.Mahauariki © 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/19/2012 11:19:00 PM
MURRAY... AFINE ENTRY..GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST... LOVE THE WAY YOU ALLOWED YOUR HEART TO GET FEATHERED AGAIN... ENJOYED,..P.D.
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Murray Mahauariki
Date: 1/20/2012 1:05:00 AM
There' s a long story behind this. but basically the mother of my four children abandoned us for for another man. The nest represents our four children as I now have full custody. Glad you enjoyed it... Muzz

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