A Tree Like Me

Will they remember? Distant clouds were close friends once, Playing shadow games.

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James Fraser

Date: 7/23/2009 3:29:00 PM

Clever write James, clouds are awesome to watch and picture>>James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2009 7:33:00 AM

Nice Haiku. Sara

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/30/2009 5:04:00 AM

Holy cow yourself Jim! This is completely awesome! Just a quick thank you too for stopping by. Miss it here so much. Love, Shar

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/28/2009 11:29:00 AM

distant clouds -----close friends will always remember what they once held---from a distance they always remain best of friends--i have some friends which are like distanr clouds but they re always in my prayers and heart---playing shadow games--sweet friendship games---beautiful,this have to go to my favs,my distant good friend--------------charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/28/2009 10:21:00 AM

Excellent work on both levels, James -- like the thought of clouds "playing shadow games," but also the remembrance of friends who drift away, much like clouds, but cast lasting shadows on our lives. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/28/2009 8:18:00 AM

Such a human element added to this serene picture...love this different twist! :)

Diane Christian

Date: 6/28/2009 7:06:00 AM

a great piece, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/27/2009 9:14:00 PM

I remember reading your last poem before I took my 2 weeks break, and thinking then how deeply elevated your thoughts had become ... your poetry is at another level now ... and this confirms it. One love

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/27/2009 7:21:00 PM

I love this Jim...I love how you used the pic to tell this story..well done.