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March-26- 2025
This or That > Vol.31. Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

 

a storm rages outside. sky, overcast with clouds fearful sounds echo, through mountain crannies, like that of shrieking bats in flight. trees shiver under wind's might. everything around, presages an impending doom. the least pressure may tilt the scales and tip the balance. sitting in my dim lit room with all the windows shut unable to drown the emptiness afloat in irrepressible buoyancy, I glance over the balance sheet of my life. There’s no surfeit, only deficit…gross deficit! once I was something, now nothing utterly broke, I lose my balance. when falling down, there’s no one to hold. my chest feels heavy. my heart sinks into pitfalls of sorrow. I wonder when this will end? while trying to make an escape route, I sink into unsettling thoughts. memories torturing, destroy what’s possible. I know when stuck in the past, I can’t focus on my present or plan for my future. life is a test of mettle. I must make the right decision. choose the right thing. I will continue my inner fight. lay claim on the eternal light. accept defeat and obliterate my ego and resurrect my inner child! I know, I will be tipping the balance with every right decision I take. I must undertake the precarious tightrope walk, in utmost caution without losing my equilibrium.

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Date: 4/7/2025 11:41:00 PM
Heartfelt congratulations, dear Valsa, on your top placement in this poetry contest with a wonderful poem, brilliantly written from the depth of your heart. The outer storm works as a prelude to the inner storm of life that " is a test of mettle." Wish you a pleasant day filled with the blessings of light.
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Date: 4/7/2025 7:30:00 AM
A great and emotional poem, Valsa, congratulations
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Date: 4/7/2025 4:23:00 AM
Such a great poem, Valsa. Brilliant imagery throughout! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 4/8/2025 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Edward for placing my poem at the top. I am at a loss of words to thank you enough. Each time you recognize my talent for which i am so grateful to you. I was away travelling... hence this belated response.
Date: 3/27/2025 6:06:00 AM
Been there, done that, didn't enjoy it one bit but knew it was God's way of growing me and prayed I'd get it right according to His will. Over and over, it has been so in my life. It's a great feel, to me, as a poet, when someone finds themself inside your lines, as I just saw me in yours ... CayCay
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful emotional poem.
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Date: 3/26/2025 9:44:00 AM
Dear sweet valsa, this feels like such a sincere and honest poem woven from your heartbeats in such a poetic manner! I absolutely love the flow and the metaphors and descriptive nature of your word weaving here! I especially love the lines “ I know when stuck in the past, I can’t focus on my present or plan for my future.” Think many can resonate with that, and the way youv interpreted the prompt is brilliant and is so very touching! Its the the emotions that emanate from your poem that truly hits the strongest for me! A fave it is for me! Best wishes always! Sending you light
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Date: 3/26/2025 9:11:00 AM
Lovely writing with emotion and description, Valsa, I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/26/2025 8:16:00 AM
- A walk on the edge of life requires real caution without losing your balance - A poem with a lot of emotion, Valsa - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2025 3:31:00 AM
Emotive and expressive work you have penned in this one. There is so much we go through in our lives and sometimes it takes just doing one thing a day to keep us holding on. Thanks for sharing these thoughts with us. The work reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 3/26/2025 3:20:00 AM
Ah so well elucidated Dear Valsa, and your closing is a classic solution which no doubt you are telling the world about in your poetry. In my experience, too many people give up, but one gets stronger in the face of difficulty and adversity. Bravo and I wish you every success in the contest, on this very important and well formulated poem. Hugs Maria
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