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 Metrical Tale Cash Prize Poetry Contest/ Sponsor: Hilo Poet

Sixth Place

video Golden Salt "Knocking On Heavens Door"

 

Expectations high did not pan out, knight in shining armor not what you thought, once again on the market for Mister Knight, yet Monsieur Next is whom you settle for, au contraire. Ever at their beckoning, beaten down by hollow lovers, prayers to Lucifer then wonders why system of time reckoning in Babylon, the last knight bids you goodbye. Golden girl purest of all, virgin's perfection, an act so tight, you’d win an ordained election, his newest prized illusion, quickly recognizes your self-deception, a paragon for his selection. Proclaiming loyalty, faithful, true blue, behind an eminent front, faultless, a pattern you’ll see, a struggling guru, the adage goes, it takes two to tango so, you know. Dark angel baring broken wing, you’re the crier at night, days scorpion’s sting, sybarite, bon vivant, emersed in rituals facetious, and obscure devotions. Suffering and desperate while egotists lead the way, pseudo shamans seeker of trends, network of cults root, altering drugs, mailable mind bends, notorious psychedelics do the trick, not for messed up heads, a real crapshoot. Luciferians, when you accepted Him as your knight, informed He is the evil leader of light the bringer of dawn, evil forces, free will and no consequences and achiever of tasks, risky for commoners like you who hide behind masks. An angel banished from heaven, for craving omnipotence at all cost, hell's indelible denizen in Dante’s Inferno or Milton’s Paradise Lost, Kundalini Serpent, Astaroth, Azazel, Beelzebub, the morning star, tainted love, you’ve tired of, lies and deception are your enemies deserving of this not you and so hale the magik that ills and pains although your nature has it you do the same. The Epicurus God Paradox bent, thoughts feeding your madness nightmares attack spinning into a vicious downward spiral, ashamed and a drag, filled with hate and sadness. Epiphany emerges, lightning flashes lit, Edison’s medicine, aware that He Lord of the Lightning, is socially frightening, you return on a grace spawned golden path, just for you. Epicureanism notions a bit askew, at the very least, falls short of the bigger picture, you get it now—evil doesn’t limit God God ultimately is the way to overcome evil, all else pales before His glowing standard, you see that you have a choice to pursue Him, learn His ways, and most importantly, have a relationship with Him, He’ll take care of you.

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Date: 1/5/2024 12:59:00 PM
Great dark storytelling.. you do this very well dear Anaya.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:17:00 PM
Oh, it's been a while. I'll need to re-read my dark thoughts. I'm sure there is light at the end. Thank you, SO
Date: 1/4/2024 12:14:00 PM
Your poetry evokes powerful emotions and showcases your exceptional writing skills. I am truly inspired by the depth and insight you bring, Anaya. It is undeniably true that God holds the key to conquering evil. Congratulations on your win, by the way, regarding your inquiry about my poem, I don't believe Pangie has had the chance to read it yet.
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:19:00 PM
I would like poets to know that. I would never leave such dark thoughts without a light at the end of the tunnel. Pangie would just adore your...Zobra The Greek!
Date: 1/9/2023 1:13:00 PM
Love your line, "God ultimately is the way to overcome evil," So True. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 1/22/2023 5:56:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. Blessed day to you!
Date: 1/7/2023 4:19:00 PM
Wow, this is such a powerful dark poem, Anaya, love your diversity, on this site.
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Date: 1/8/2023 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Harry. I appreciate that! Happy and healthy new year!
Date: 1/7/2023 3:15:00 PM
Quite a dark verse Anaya, we should never give up on hope always heading for the light. Best of luck in the contest. Enjoy your weekend Tom
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Date: 1/8/2023 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. Have a nice day!
Date: 1/7/2023 1:33:00 PM
An intimate tour-de-force of vulnerability, innocence lost, and divine grace bestowed. An unflinching account of Phoenix arising from a soul's ruins. GL, Robert
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Date: 1/8/2023 9:08:00 AM
You got it Robert! Thank you for your awesomeness and your review. ~Anaya
Date: 1/7/2023 9:55:00 AM
A dark tour de force, Anaya. Great and good luck in the contest. ;o]
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Date: 1/7/2023 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, ;o]! A downward spiral is defined as a situation where a series of negative thoughts, emotions, and actions continuously feed back into themselves, causing the situation to become progressively worse. Downward spirals are often provoked by jumping to the worst-case conclusion. :D
Date: 1/7/2023 2:52:00 AM
Your last paragraph is your redeeming feature. When you follow the light you will know that darkness cannot possess you.
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Date: 1/7/2023 10:54:00 AM
Some come back, Victor. Good to be optimistic :D

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