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A Tail Like a Fish

Too-tall Jackson had a tail like a fish But when he swam his gym shoes went squish-squish He took up basketball That was sure the right call Happy end to his tale ~ A perfect swish!

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Date: 12/27/2019 6:26:00 PM
A whale of a tail!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/28/2019 7:41:00 PM
Ha, ha. Love your comment. Did you make it on porpoise? LOL. Thanks, Jean! ~ Gershon
Date: 12/20/2019 2:50:00 PM
Darling ending! I sometimes have a swish, but I doubt it is ever perfect!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2019 3:18:00 PM
Dr. Zeuss could do wonders for this poem... fOne fish, two fish, red fish, blue fish... YOU surely know the drill... Sm les, gw
Date: 12/20/2019 11:41:00 AM
Oh boy, you're in a rib-tickling mood now. Enjoyed.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2019 12:54:00 PM
As well as a gill-giggling mood... :)
Date: 12/20/2019 8:36:00 AM
Lol! Gershon, I found this one to be hilarious. If only you could see image in my head. It your fault lol! :-) Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2019 12:54:00 PM
It is always all my fault. My wife has trained me well. I can now roll over, sit up and beg too. ~ Arf
Date: 12/20/2019 12:02:00 AM
Ba dum tss ;) So much fun, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2019 12:52:00 PM
Ka-choonk. :) Thanks, H.T!
Date: 12/19/2019 10:11:00 PM
Sounds like a 'fishy' tale to me ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2019 12:52:00 PM
Aw, you wrote that on porpoise, Michelle. Thanks, gw

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