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A group of tree swallows huddle on a branch during spring snowstorm

I am a blue Swallow. I was born in the late summer, and my parents taught me everything they could before leaving me to fend for myself. I spent all autumn gathering food and hiding it in a thousand places ... I have a good memory ! Oh, winter, winter all the time! Will, you ever end? Each day is a struggle, so many days with snow falling, winds blowing and freezing temperatures. I have grown dense and downy feathers and can drop my body temperature. Shivering keeps me warm ! I like to cuddle and roost with my bird friends on a tree branch being close keeps us warm and we like to pull up our feet, one at a time, and I am good at finding warm places to sleep at night like a tree cavity, any gap, nook or a house eave will do nicely ! I love how some nice humans put out feeders in the winter, filling them with tasty seeds, and hanging suet from branches even leaving warm water for washing, and even some leave bird boxes where many of us set up a warm cozy winter home ! Oh, when will winter be leaving and spring coming please I long for the sun to start melting the cold winter snow and ice the trees will start to groan and creak as they come alive and when I am sleeping ... I dream of beautiful things to come ! On a sunny branch I fluff up my feather and preen myself I feel a change and I am gaily singing a song of happiness for spring is here and it won't be long till all is lush green I survived because I prevailed though I weigh only ounces ! _____________________ January 24, 2023 Poetry/Personification/A Swallow's Winter View Copyright Protected, ID 01-1519-918-24 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Winter Is Not Forever sponsor, BJ Legros Kelley, Judged 02/19/2023 Second Place

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Date: 2/19/2023 11:27:00 PM
A beautifully musical write on a Swallow's Winter View. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2023 3:44:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/19/2023 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. They look so cold. Spring will be here soon. Have a blessed day writing away............................
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2023 5:30:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations, the compliment, and comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/19/2023 12:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance! Thank you for entering your wonderful poem in the 'Winter is not Forever' contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2023 5:31:00 PM
BJ, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the congratulations and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 1/26/2023 1:48:00 AM
It is always amazing to me how the birds manage to survive. We get many migratory birds in my area that come through in fall going further south to spend winter. I like this one told from the birds' point of view. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2023 12:56:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 1/24/2023 4:38:00 PM
Read this one to my wife Constance we loved this Poetry of yours and we both love watching birds. She feeds them regularly. Thanks for sharing...
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Constance La France
Date: 1/27/2023 12:58:00 PM
Michael, thank you so much for the visit, compliment and comment, and for sharing it with your wife, so happy you both liked my poem, and thanks for feeding the birds, Constance

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