A Streamlet

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A streamlet falls into a lake as mist do the cherry blossoms make.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2019 6:14:00 PM

pretty as a picture!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/28/2019 7:30:00 PM

Lovely, Dale.

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 4/28/2019 1:57:00 PM

Now I understand why this genre is called Crystalline. Crystal clear words in a boundless space of meaning. It's amazing. Good luck, Dale.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/28/2019 2:19:00 PM

Thanks, Kurt. Give it a go!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/28/2019 12:16:00 PM

- A lovely flowering by the lake, Dale :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 4/28/2019 12:21:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.