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A River Runs Through It

A River Runs Through It A river runs through this little piece of earth Views serene, my heart can be light I eavesdrop on the voice of the river As it rumbles through boulders forthright The current chimes harmonious music Synchronize with the whispering trees They sing of their many journeys My lull as I get high on the breeze Though oft’ times the river rages and roars Seek the times it’s hush and calm Dip your hand for a refreshing chill, to lightly flow across your palm ©2011/06/28 - 2011/06/29 6TH PLACE IN Contest: A river runs through it - Barbara Gorelick 3 stanza quatrain

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Date: 7/7/2011 1:48:00 PM
Beautiful, Miranda. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:56:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest , Randa
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Date: 7/5/2011 9:33:00 AM
congrats on your win with exceptional piece. cory
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Date: 7/5/2011 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest...luv shannon
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Randa in Barbara's "A River Runs Through It contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:44:00 AM
This is wonderful. A well deserved win in the contest. Love that last stanza. Heck I love all of them!
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:18:00 PM
very pretty description, congrats on your win in the contest Miranda
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:02:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:28:00 PM
Congrats Randa on your magnificent win in the contest with this elegant piece on the river flow luv.. enjoy as u celebrate a happy 4th.. free and happy luv..
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:00:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest. Well done. BG
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:08:00 PM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Miranda. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:05:00 PM
Very pleasing expressions on the river, W.B
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:49:00 AM
A lovely poem on river....enjoyed.Best wishes.
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Date: 6/29/2011 9:34:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this exceptional piece, I tired to write one for the contest but have had no luck. cory
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