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I like faint fire I feel fueling me with fervor for far off places without you I like sweet scent of spring I smell when you fan the flames ignited by your carefree hand I like warmth seeping in letting my blood course free with unpredictable energy I like refreshing air I breathe just seeing freedom lay waiting me - sole initiator of breezy times I like option one and two of the whole shebang of things I am free to do, or not do I like how instant choice to vent is mine, though time after time ... I've crossed no line ... I like solitary silence taking me by the hand Soothing aches you've unhand I like Creator's time so packed with magic My sole therapeutic fix. *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/31/2016 4:42:00 PM
Hi Iris, I like your poem and I gravitate to: "I like option one and two" because like you I am free to do or not do
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Date: 5/29/2016 5:17:00 PM
I like solitary silence too it is often at these times I write I particularly like the 6th stanza:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/15/2016 3:16:00 AM
Wonderful piece my dear friend, Iris. I enjoyed every line. Thanks a lot for sharing! love lots and hug, Galeo
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