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A Moment In Time

In that moment his eyes swirled with all of the love he held for me; with every ounce of life that he would happily lay down for me In that moment I felt the covering of all the pain I had ever felt; the vanishing of every tear shed through the trials life had dealt In that moment the wind whispering my destiny became a roar; lifting me from my path riddled with obstacles, making me soar In this moment my heart does not hurt; my tears do not sting Let me live in this moment for life; until my requiem they sing 07/21/2018

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Date: 2/20/2022 4:01:00 PM
Lovely poem.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 6/20/2022 11:43:00 PM
Thank you Stephen.
Date: 12/8/2020 1:29:00 PM
Ah, loves like these <3 "with every ounce of life that he would happily lay down for me" I love that line. Well done!
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Fj Thomas
Date: 12/9/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much again for your visits Jessie :))
Date: 12/5/2020 8:04:00 PM
What a beautiful moment to capture forever... great poem my dear friend :)
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Fj Thomas
Date: 12/6/2020 11:34:00 AM
Thanks again Akkina :)
Date: 12/1/2020 4:45:00 PM
Hello FJ … These moments in time are treasures that are never forgotten but kept close to the heart - thanks FJ - Lindsay
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Fj Thomas
Date: 12/1/2020 7:04:00 PM
Definitely treasures Lindsay. Thank you.
Date: 4/12/2020 10:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem. FJ. How wonderful it would be to relive certain moments. I Hope all is well. JC Hawkens
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Fj Thomas
Date: 12/1/2020 7:04:00 PM
So very wonderful JC :) thank you.
Date: 1/31/2020 3:59:00 PM
Very beautiful...sweet lady.Nice to read you this evening.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/3/2020 7:29:00 PM
Ah sweet Charma. How awesome to see you here. Thank you :)
Date: 1/5/2020 7:24:00 AM
So beautiful, F.J. If only we can stay in that moment forever :) Charlie
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Fj Thomas
Date: 1/6/2020 9:00:00 AM
If only Charles, if only. You have been so kind in your words to me Charles; it is very uplifting. Thank you
Date: 1/4/2020 2:47:00 PM
Such a beautiful piece FJ, bringing that moment in time to reality. Nicely done!
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Fj Thomas
Date: 1/4/2020 3:58:00 PM
Thanks so much Gordan :)
Date: 1/3/2020 4:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing and a Happy New Year to you. Kind wishes, Kai
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Fj Thomas
Date: 1/4/2020 11:56:00 AM
All the best to you Kai!
Date: 1/2/2020 4:22:00 AM
I am so glad that you had that moment so you could share her with us.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 1/2/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank you again Caren; and thank you for all the time you given my writings :)
Date: 10/19/2019 10:30:00 AM
I could feel the emotion in each line Flo, and I can certainly relate to all you feel. Blessings Carl
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Fj Thomas
Date: 1/2/2020 9:56:00 AM
I think every poet longs to hear those words; thank you very much Carl.
Date: 7/23/2019 12:50:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this beauty again. Hugs Rick.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 1/2/2020 9:55:00 AM
Thank you Rick :)
Date: 4/25/2019 7:29:00 AM
So beautiful like the soul of the writer, my dear. I've missed you so much. Please check your soup mail. Hugs
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Date: 1/2/2020 9:55:00 AM
Don't know why I have so many comments I have not responded to; miss you Eilee
Date: 3/26/2019 2:57:00 PM
THANKS FOR YOUR VISIT, THIS POEM OF YOURS TOO IS VERY GOOD. KEEP IT UP
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Date: 1/2/2020 9:54:00 AM
Thanks Derek :)
Date: 2/13/2019 11:43:00 AM
Hi Flo, thanks for your visit and comment on my “The Girl With The Quiet Voice” yes she has read the piece. I wrote it for her after she opened up at a dinner my wife and I hosted. Her reaction is the reason why poets write. Hugs to you dear one.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/13/2019 12:41:00 PM
....it truly is
Date: 2/4/2019 5:28:00 PM
Hey Flo....My muse is headed your way again! Please be easy on him!!!
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Date: 2/13/2019 12:13:00 PM
Lolol I haven't much bark left let alone bite Chuck. Hello old friend :)
Date: 12/26/2018 8:16:00 AM
True love is capable of working wonders, Flo. The intensity of your words reflects the intensity of that special moment. ~ Hope you are keeping well; your absence has not gone unnoticed, and that is what spurred me to check out your posts this morning! Warm regards...take care. // paul
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/13/2019 12:12:00 PM
I sincerely appreciate you checking on me Paul. Your words are a comfort. Thank you
Date: 11/25/2018 10:48:00 AM
To recognize and to capture that moment forever..... is bliss. A wonderful write Flo. Hugs
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/13/2019 12:11:00 PM
Hi Cecilia :) thank you so so much.
Date: 11/7/2018 7:00:00 AM
Ha ha, I’m glad you resisted the urge to choke him. Have s great day!
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/13/2019 12:10:00 PM
Lolol forgot about that.
Date: 10/31/2018 4:16:00 AM
Hey I'm back now. I have been disposed to say the least. I really am lost. I don't even know what more to say.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/13/2019 12:10:00 PM
Sorry I'm so hit and miss Way but glad you are back! :D
Date: 10/20/2018 9:49:00 PM
A beautiful moment in deed, but what of the beautiful moments to come?
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Date: 2/13/2019 12:07:00 PM
Intertwined with the bad ones, many came. Making for a beautifully strong couple ;) Hello James
Date: 10/15/2018 10:57:00 AM
An awesome rhyming appreciation of live, sacrificing wow. Reads real nice and poetic wow! I like how u used the word requiem. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, plz do write your thoughts/ comment under my newest poem too.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/13/2019 12:09:00 PM
Hi S.zaynab, I have been offline a little so I will be making my way your way :)
Date: 10/14/2018 12:33:00 AM
Nice job; I look forward to reading more poems by you -JT
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Fj Thomas
Date: 2/13/2019 12:07:00 PM
Thank you James :)
Date: 8/27/2018 8:20:00 AM
Great last stanza FJ... So poetic, I hope they let you live in the moment.. sadly the moment does not last forever...
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Fj Thomas
Date: 8/29/2018 7:38:00 AM
Good morning S1 :) No, right now they do not last forever. But I am blessed to have at least experienced emotions that strong. I hope you've been well S1.
Date: 8/11/2018 8:23:00 PM
Such an amazing rhyme, FJ.. Beautifully written as your words flow perfectly.. I really enjoyed your wonderful rhyme! Blessings!!
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Fj Thomas
Date: 8/26/2018 8:46:00 PM
Thank you very much Robertina!
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