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A Light Through Yonder Window

When last the Angels come to take me home I'll pause in sheltered memories I leave and peacefully my mind will surely roam within the quiet calm that they conceive. Your lair and guarded threshold beckoned me, though hidden well behind tradition's door and wrapped within your Mother's wistful pleas, still, couldn't hide the heart I so adored. Much like the fabled Montague of old, I dared the very doorstep where you slept - in kindred sharing laughed with truths you told and gently swept the happy tears you wept. The twilight glows upon what love begets; forever you remain my Capulet ...

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Date: 2/5/2025 3:41:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this sonnet which, as always, you deliver with [apparent] ease, Craig. I like the reference to Shakespeare's play Romeo and Juliet. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/28/2025 5:05:00 AM
Hello Craig, I loved reading your Sonnet and thought how your words carry the timeless ache of love’s courage and devotion. That Shakespearean soul, blended with your own tender touch, lingers beautifully. You’ve turned longing into something eternal. Truly captivating. Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/28/2025 8:04:00 AM
Very kind Daniel - thank you!
Date: 1/28/2025 2:45:00 AM
Great sonnet, Craig. Your sonnets are the reason they are my favorite form. I love writing them and I do believe it was one of your contests that I wrote my first ever sonnet for. Hope all is well...CM
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/28/2025 8:03:00 AM
Honored Charlie & congrats on your thousandth !
Date: 1/27/2025 9:26:00 PM
Worthy piece indeed, Sir Cornish.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/28/2025 8:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Arlo.
Date: 1/27/2025 5:08:00 PM
Exquisite
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/27/2025 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Thomas!
Date: 1/27/2025 12:42:00 PM
A magnificent sonnet full of deep and enduring love that transcends cultural borders and familial expectations, reminiscent of Shakespeare's renowned lovers in "Romeo and Juliet."
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/27/2025 7:02:00 PM
Very kind Sotto and yes, the penultimate love story...
Date: 1/27/2025 11:42:00 AM
EXCELLENT!! As a sonnet should be. Hope all is well with you my friend.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 1/27/2025 7:01:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel

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