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This poem is inspired by the theme, A Kiss of Sunshine for a contest

taking an early walk along the shore awaiting for the royal entrance of the new day through His Love Divine--- I hear the whisper of the cold and gentle wind into my ears saying: the arrival of your majestic prince of the universe has now begun excitements I feel deep down in my heart giving a fleeting glimpse at the side of the ocean there lies the long ranges of mountain-tops seems as if they hide him from me giving me suspense on his final exquisite appearance as the ebbs move gracefully on their way back… carpeting his path waves all arise welcoming him with their loveliest prelude the cold breeze gently wafts the perfumes as peaceful as they could a scent of the blue ocean-potpourri filling the air up to the clouds then down to my mood as my prince finally ascends unto the clear sky through his radiant rays he sends me right away his glowing smiles descending his loving touch mellowed by God’s Loving Embraces from my face creeping down to my whole being all I feel is his warmth: an assurance that forever He cares a very wonderful feeling I can’t explain I close my eyes and raise my gentle face towards his rays trying to absorb all the blessings and graces he brings Oh, what a great and wonderful feeling! keeping still my chin up on high exposing to him my rosy cheeked face as I close my eyes then I protrude my lips As I want to finally feel my Prince Sun’s warmest kiss a kiss of my Darling Sunshine a sweet kiss of love the greatest and eternal love from up above
Feb. 9, 2013 2.30pm Note: I love sunshine! My father gave me a ring when I was still young engraved with words Darling Sunshine because according to him I was born during sunrise. I lost the ring when I was staying in a dormitory as a student. Sixth Place Contest: Verse Poems Judged: 3/12/2013 Sponsor: Poet Nathan A Third Place Contest: A Kiss of Sunshine Judged: 3/25/2013 Sponsor: Poet Gail Angel Doyle First Place Contest: In Honor of my Fave Poem Judged: 4/11/2013 Sponsor: Poet Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 4/22/2013 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Leonora! I enjoyed revisiting this one. RAY
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Date: 4/21/2013 11:34:00 PM
A much decorated poem, Leonora. And deservedly. Congratulations.-Red
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Date: 4/20/2013 2:58:00 PM
congrats on your winning fave poem, "ocean-potpourri" - sublime - so much deep spirituality and contemplation in this...sad about the ring!
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Date: 4/20/2013 11:31:00 AM
Congrats on your win Leonara... Well done~A.O
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:45:00 AM
Well you now rightfully have another win to add to the list sweetie...this is a beautifully written prayer to me.....thanks and congratulations
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Date: 4/20/2013 6:22:00 AM
congrats on a great win Leonora
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Date: 4/20/2013 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations Leonora! Well done! Big hugs!! Deb
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Date: 4/19/2013 11:16:00 PM
lovely imagery, it just calms and soothes the reader, congrats on making Andrea's Fave's list
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Date: 4/19/2013 9:40:00 PM
Hello My sweet and dearest sis.... stopping by to congratulate you In Andrea's fave contest.... Congratulations... my sweet sis.... *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:33:00 PM
Hello Leonora, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:42:00 AM
ha ha Kisses of sunshine on me face... i noticed send you a message at the same time you send me one.... how sweet.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 3/29/2013 5:18:00 PM
Leonora, how are you today, Sweetie pie? Glad to see you on this list. Not too many people on it so it's awesome to see you a winner. congratulations.
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Date: 3/28/2013 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations, with your winning poem my sweet sis Leonora , I'm also stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"
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Date: 3/27/2013 4:26:00 AM
A kiss of sunshine from your pen Leo, congratulations and what a terrible shame about the ring xx
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Date: 3/26/2013 4:21:00 PM
Beautiful and lovely piece,Leonora...Great write..Congratulations on your well deserved win...Love and hugs...Olusegun..
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:08:00 PM
A lovely poem that well deserved its win. Congratulations, Leonora. - Red
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Date: 3/26/2013 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations Leonora.....I knew you would win...Donna
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Date: 3/26/2013 9:28:00 AM
This is lovely and unique. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 3/13/2013 5:30:00 PM
Hi Sweet Leo,,, . your poem is amazing! and I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA
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Date: 3/10/2013 2:18:00 PM
Hi, sweetie, thanks for your comments today!!!
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Date: 3/9/2013 4:06:00 PM
It does feel like Gods loving embrace. The warm sunshine...wonderful poem..sorry about the loss of your treasured ring...
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Date: 3/9/2013 1:38:00 PM
This is a truly tremendous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this afternoon! What a powerful poem this one surely is, such a creative piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/9/2013 11:05:00 AM
wow, Leonora, this is what I call REALLY being inspired by a poetry contest, and I love the footnote you showed us, making it even more special. Congrats. I am sure this will score high.
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Date: 3/9/2013 10:47:00 AM
my dear Leonora, I always say :WOW" every time I read all your poems. you are really gifted and talented poet. This poem of yours are superb to the highest level. so proud of you dear friend. Good luck in the contest. God bless you always. Hugs and Love, maria
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Date: 3/9/2013 10:30:00 AM
Wooow .... Leonora my friend, a really beautifully poem! - Each line is filled with love, a poem that will be remembered and loved. - I have no doubt that it will stand on the highest place in the winning list, good luck! - Wishes also that your weekend will be lovely and relaxed. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :))
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