A Heart's Melody

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*Image of Music Heart by Pixabay. A Heart's Melody Harmony palpitates...conducts the abandoned chamber, albeit, interludes providently...kept in tune with themselves. The metered winks...influencing oneness to soothe and rise. The cloud nine reviewed....negotiating remembrances of "Each and All", the "Earth Song" by Emerson...a ballad medley. Unversed preexistence...reminiscence, rekindled charge. Harp rhythms veinuous strings strumming...as the organ pedals. Some rhapsodical soul...repeatedly ensures an airy suite. Rehearsed pulses...convey themselves as an opening night. Calm sounds reflect symmetry...hallowed core pleasures a theme donning inner expressions...grants the life-timers brevity's blinks. Solemn occasions the welcomed psalm...heartfelt gifts its claim. Juxtaposed rapture instants...contrariety absent of muted aches for a quiver...contrite hands fold into prayers, beckoned Heaven's gate perseverance...angels heralding. Unsung Heavenly cadences extend...stead the swan song that left open--an invitation...as internal hope vibrates, a renewed life has been rewarded...the heartbeat pipes true. 2022 December 09 *9th Place* Thought rested awareness ~~Unseeking Seeker *HM* SECOND CHANCE FOR YOUR N-A ~~Brian Strand: Judging 2022 December 19 *HMS.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/3/2023 10:16:00 AM

A melodic masterpiece my friend! Your have so skillfully woven the elements of music into every line - elements that so beautifully express the life rewarded and renewed in life's music! Congratulations! Blessings of beautiful music for the new year!

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/3/2023 11:09:00 AM

Thanks again, Sam, for your wealth in words, and a blessed 2023 as well my friend, Aloha William

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/21/2022 2:55:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/21/2022 6:52:00 AM

Sentiment indeed, Sara.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/12/2022 11:57:00 AM

"Calm sounds reflect symmetry" just one of your amazing lines William like "unsung Heavenly cadences extend!" I know this wonderful poem comes from the music that lives in your heart! Mahalo for the song and for your poetic heart. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joy. In my prayers as I hear more and more about the volcano eruptions!!

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/12/2022 12:41:00 PM

Mahalo no na olelo, Sam, since US' noted post, I'm amidst yearend paperwork here, yet stop to drop a line, my friend, Aloha nui loa William

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/12/2022 7:32:00 AM

Amazing craft! Any poet can be easily envious of your remarkable artistry! Warmest congratulations on your win, HP

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/12/2022 9:20:00 AM

I truly appreciate your sincere words, US, thank you, my friend, Aloha William