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A Graveyard Ridden With Guilt

There's a mist heavy and hard All around this sad graveyard That's filling my hart with pain Thinking I'm the one to blame For your demise from this earth Not knowing what it's all worth When darkness covers the light After having a huge fight With the one I care about Every day I want to shout Because you left angrily And it's weighing heavily That your madness caused the crash Taking your life as you smash Into the river down below Now your wearing a halo As I have to face each day Without you---it's not O.K. That I'm here barely surviving Minutes pass by as I'm striving To find courage that I need Not to cut myself and bleed From the guilt that i still feel It's becoming way too real My heart can not be mended As my life is finally ended

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/29/2014 6:42:00 PM
this portrays well the way such an incident can leave another feeling pain. I like the way you ended it on that tragic note, robin. and the title is pretty cool for this one too.
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:59:00 AM
powerful but heartbreaking write, my friend. I hope this is just fiction!
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Date: 4/22/2014 4:43:00 AM
typo line 3, no 'e' in heart. But gosh on this day your titles are grave, not autobiographical I hope. Otherwise nice flow, and an interesting, engaging read. Well done.
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Date: 4/22/2014 12:44:00 AM
Full of grief and touchy at the same time. If this is for a contest please check spelling of hart -third line, Robin
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Date: 4/21/2014 8:54:00 PM
Great write, very Poe, a style I like very much!!!
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