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Miss Muffet was a girl of thirteen, filled with youth's beauty and charm; And a love of vibrant life zealous, like eager, vivid thunder of blue alarm. She was a fine student, pert and popular; like the primrose popularity; Or stars appearing at the designated hour, sparkling like crystal clarity. Mary Muffet lived in a small town, with loving parents and her siblings, Who sympathized with her fear of spiders; like colorful, fall misgivings. Friends flanked their white picket fence, in fall days of glamour, striking; And wove fanciful tales with flourish, like flowering genesis, so enticing! Far off family ofttimes visited Fernglen, with its farms, rich with future; For fishing and other rollicking fun, staying on 'til varicolored, fall rumor. They lived in the house of quaint beauty, like charming red, berry sun; Fondly gazing on pearly moon twice daily, the ritual begun on day one. Songs sunrise to sunset serenaded, on dappled, silent, Sowerby Street; But, a scorching summer bled scarlet roses, at the red butterfly retreat. Near neighbors stayed on a first name basis, in unending, plum seasons; Of days and nights of green nature; like teal surf, which never weakens. Summer's glory was in the tiny details, like prayer plants, giving praise; When sun face orchids, wore sunny smiles, in colored fields of noon haze. And jade baby toes plants were crawling, through hours of soon history; In honey days of bicolored hibiscus, filled with heady scents of mystery. Mary attended a church celebration one day, along with her whole family; And food was served indoors and out, as pink robin sang of gold, happily. Mary had such fun playing games! There was much laughter and talking. Then Mary had a craving for cheese, so like shadows, inside went walking. Once inside, 'Little Miss Muffet sat on a tuffet, eating her curds and whey; There came a big spider, who sat down beside her, And frightened Miss Muffet away.' As Mary screamed and ran, causing a rumpus, she drew a lot of attention; But, was suddenly embarrassed by her overreaction, like fall's suspension. Little Miss Muffet was thence more mature, a natural result of getting older, And fear of spiders was left behind, like summer blossoming, grown bolder.

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Date: 7/23/2024 12:19:00 PM
so vivid scenery, and surprising personnages, words sound perfectly, and the emotion is au rendez vous, merci du partage evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/23/2024 10:30:00 PM
Merci beaucoup. Your lovely comment delights. Blessings.
Date: 7/23/2024 11:15:00 AM
This is so good dear evelyn, such brilliant metaphors, word pairings, alliterations, imagery and use of colors! I just love the way your storytelling here rhymes too! And goes well with tom woodys latest contest, this is perfect! A fave from me for your clever and artistic word weaving! Always a pleasure reading your work, sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/23/2024 10:26:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful, lovely expressions and for your kind fave as well, dear friend. Your appreciation is heartwarming. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Date: 7/22/2024 6:08:00 AM
What an awesome take Evelyn. I really wish you had entered this it surely would have ranked high (I know, peer sponsored contests are arbitrary, but still...). You are so good at fleshing out details without overdoing it. Kudos for this gem
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2024 3:02:00 PM
Your kind remarks are very much appreciated, Tom. I have enjoyed reading the delightful poems that were entered into this contest, and also, your poem, 'Jack and Jill - The True Story.' Have a blessed week. :)
Date: 7/20/2024 10:34:00 AM
Great storytelling in your couplets.. It flows so well.. nice rhymes.. Is it for the contest? Best of luck if it is..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/20/2024 10:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for your fine compliments. I wanted to enter the contest, but decided not to, because of the repeating themes in these tales, such as, friends, family, home, the street home is located on, neighbors, etc. I felt that these repeating themes would impact my anonymity.
Date: 7/20/2024 3:15:00 AM
Stupendous. So many alliterations and imagery attracted me to your Saturday poem. Always look forward to your poem.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/20/2024 10:22:00 PM
It warms my heart that you look forward to these poems, Victor. Thank you for telling me so. I appreciate your compliments, too.
Date: 7/19/2024 8:38:00 PM
I always loved this nursery rhyme. Your poem is a panoramic enhancement that brings Miss Muffet to life. Thank you for tonight's bedtime story.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/19/2024 11:03:00 PM
It fills me with delight to know that you enjoyed this tale, based upon a nursery rhyme, beloved of you. Thank you so much for letting me know.
Date: 7/19/2024 8:06:00 PM
Songs sunrise to sunset serenaded, on dappled, silent, Sowerby Street… In honey days of bicolored hibiscus, filled with heady scents of mystery… But, was suddenly embarrassed by her overreaction, like fall's suspension (the untold story haha) Love that you named her Mary Muffet. Hugs ~ Kim
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/19/2024 10:57:00 PM
Thank you for the lasting joy of your lovely remarks, Kim. So glad you enjoyed this tale. Blessings and hugs. :)

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