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Hope and despair are partners, try and figure it out, passion in an endangered soul that chose to give me no name. Perhaps she needs none, who knows? For she brought chaos to my heart, upset my strictly precise ways. Stars falter at her glacial glance and the sun hides its shine in shame. Yet I cannot bear to be without her luscious intoxication, like a delirious drug-addicted creature, that knows he'll never survive, for to be with her is a lingering death, to be without her is eternal hell.

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Date: 2/14/2021 9:07:00 PM
A love like this only comes around once in ten lifetimes, Victor. "without her luscious intoxication, like a delirious drug-addicted creature, that knows he'll never survive" Wow!
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Date: 2/13/2021 8:01:00 PM
Victor, Brilliant L-O-V-E, Yes that just about sums it up. Guess it's time to refill the prescription. -Richard
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Date: 2/12/2021 7:38:00 PM
Great write, Vic, I love it. Love is a drug that we all crave for :)
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Date: 2/11/2021 10:44:00 PM
Love it, well said..
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:38:00 AM
So well put, Victor:)
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Date: 2/10/2021 10:38:00 PM
Oh. Goodness,Victor! Hi! I am tapping this a Fav. There are issues of intensity & passion here too. I get accused of it & have been told some of my poetry even, is Intense. Pavoratti on his Duetscd has a song “I can’t live with you or without you”=great sing. Says it all. Live to cheers, hugs! sallly
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Date: 2/10/2021 8:58:00 PM
Spoilt for choice Victor. But makes for great poetry..Excellent write.
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Date: 2/10/2021 8:54:00 PM
You portrayed the condition of being hopelessly in love so well, Victor. As with any addiction, it takes true willpower to conquer. :)
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Date: 2/10/2021 3:16:00 PM
Damned if you do damned if you dont, there is no cure. Tom
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Date: 2/10/2021 12:49:00 PM
Hi Victor, A love like that is so sad. Well done. Have a wonderful day, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/10/2021 12:48:00 PM
WoW! What a deeply touching piece. So much emotion. Really shows the talent that is in you my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/10/2021 8:14:00 AM
Superb write! Dopamine steadied by Serotonin, in time :)
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:23:00 AM
Intoxicating love has him trapped. Price we pay for passion. Beautifully done, Victor.
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Date: 2/10/2021 7:16:00 AM
- Love is like a drug ... and we all want to enjoy it, Victor :) - A heartfelt writing, my friend :) - Sorry I have not been to soup the last week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/10/2021 6:39:00 AM
Passion is like a drug. So well penned. True love is never a drug. Great write
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Date: 2/10/2021 5:13:00 AM
Very sad. To be so in love is torture.
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Date: 2/10/2021 4:43:00 AM
Love can be a drug but it is the very best kind. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/10/2021 3:22:00 AM
Love can be like a drug, well done Victor! hugs
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