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A December Memento

at first fall of snow on rustic bench we sat by watching snowflakes dance ~ under your old umbrella young dreams we shaped in snowballs 10 December 2022 A December Memento Poetry Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich Your Choice 2023 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 1/19/2023 10:27:00 AM
I love that last line; it has childhood hopes and playfulness to it.
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Date: 1/6/2023 6:34:00 AM
Sweet, sweet, sweet! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/26/2022 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Blessings.................
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Date: 12/25/2022 2:26:00 AM
"watching snowflakes dance" - is, indeed, is mystery-filled fun. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/24/2022 7:02:00 PM
I love the memory of youth in making snowballs. A sweet poem, my friend. thanks for entering my contest and congrats on the win.
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Date: 12/10/2022 8:18:00 PM
Young days are reserved for dreams ! In snow fall under an umbrella, it is exciting to be with company, dreaming away. Sweet memories.
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Date: 12/9/2022 8:30:00 PM
Remember....? Good luck wishes in the contest. =;o]
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