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A Daydream Escapes

I drift. Through the doldrum of the day - downstream of indifference… a daydream escapes. Flower clouds at dusk. I dare, Odilon's delight. I drift off, further, into dreams of the night.

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Date: 8/13/2024 7:36:00 AM
beautiful. love the voice, love the layout.
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Kate Davies
Date: 8/24/2024 1:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Line X
Date: 8/5/2024 3:19:00 PM
wow, I love this. Congrats.
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Kate Davies
Date: 8/9/2024 6:29:00 AM
Thank you Andrea! Much appreciated:)
Date: 7/29/2024 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win! "Downstream of indifference" such a universal reality.
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Kate Davies
Date: 7/29/2024 2:01:00 PM
Thank you David for your kind words!
Date: 7/29/2024 2:22:00 AM
Excellent! Very lovely! Congrats on your well deserved top win!
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Kate Davies
Date: 7/29/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Krish, glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 7/29/2024 1:19:00 AM
Excellent, congratulations
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Kate Davies
Date: 7/29/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Terry! It was a lovely surprise:)
Date: 7/29/2024 1:10:00 AM
splendid. Congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Date: 7/29/2024 1:07:00 AM
splendid. Congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
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Kate Davies
Date: 7/29/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 6/28/2024 2:38:00 AM
Expertly done Kate, there is a lot to be gleaned in the drift.
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Kate Davies
Date: 6/28/2024 3:05:00 AM
Thanks Di11y Da11y :)

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