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If you're passing by Soup Creek our peace loving town Do pay us a visit but wear a big smile not a frown Our town is open to everybody all colours and creed But check in your guns because those you won't need. The only people allowed guns are the sherrif and deputies If you don't check them in then the sheriff you won't please Jenna too has a permit and cradles a repeating Winchester Don't cause a ruckus in her saloon because you'll upset her. So be warned if you cause trouble you'll be treated with scorn You'll incur the wrath of the townsfolk and wish you weren't born We want everyone who comes here to have an enjoyable stay Soup Creek is a peaceful town and we aim to keep it that way. Before you reach our town you'll notice a derelict old shack A crazy woman lives there but keep going and don't look back She's bad mouthed unwashed and complains about lack of heat And she's not a very nice person and not one you'd like to meet. The derelict cattle men's office is now the towns library Where you can read dime novels and books of poetry Also on Fridays the schoolhouse teacher Miss Forsyth Holds a class for the townsfolk to help them read and write. There's a bordello located at the far end of main street All the good townsfolk don't condone it so please be discreet Every Thursday they have happy hour and services half price But please make sure you're clean and not crawling with lice. There's a new hotel called 'Aces' owned by gambler Milton Rooms have sturdy pine beds and all with clean sheets on On some very rare occasions you may have to share a bed And if you're of a bashful nature you can top and tail instead. Chinese barber Lee will shave you and he grooms ladies too Takes years off your appearance making you look like new A bathhouse is out the back where you can wash off the dust And if you like a good whiskey then Jenna's Saloon is a must. That not only sells aged whiskey but has good music too Mayor Tom and Tania sing in harmony to entertain you The saloon was nearing bankruptcy until Jenna acquired it Helped by an Aussie girl Deb and is now making a profit. Another new resident in our town is a girl from California Who has just opened a steak house and her name is Anaya She'll cook steak to your liking because she aims to please It's the best steak house you'll find this side of the Rockies. Two weeks before Christmas it's the mayor's annual parade Milton dresses as Ol' Santa and gives kids candy and limeade Ranger David and new deputy Terry give Ol' Santa a hand And there's music from across the border with a mariachi band. If you're looking for winter sports then you'll be disappointed But in the new year we have a rodeo and everyone is invited You can win fifty bucks if you can stay ten minutes on a steer Afterwards there's a hog roast and Jenna provides the beer. Sheriff Koplin never drops his guard he'll be watching everyone Because occasionally we have lowlifes who want to spoil the fun There's always something going on in our friendly little town A big Soup Creek welcome awaits you but remember no frown. If you celebrate Christmas then we hope you have a good one And if you don't then enjoy the time off and have lots of fun Soup Creek residents wishes everyone joy and good cheer And with good health and happiness in the coming new year. Written on 14th December

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Date: 12/17/2023 8:16:00 AM
So this is one I hadn't read. When you make a comment, I like to go back and look at some of the previous works. I was just thrilled to see your hard work and generosity to the people. That's a sign of intelligence coupled with work. The picture video editing is also amazing. I actually not sure that it's not real. A sign of real love of work, and that is something special. Wonderful holiday season to you, sir!!
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 12/17/2023 8:27:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke, I'm happy you enjoyed it. After Milton passed away we renamed the town Milton Creek in remembrance of him. Poets loved the sagas and I just keep going, not sure where that town is but that's me on the left. Hoping you too have a wonderful Christmas and a happy new year. Tom
Date: 2/28/2023 10:14:00 AM
Love your description of the Soup Creek and its folks Tom!! I too enjoy this peace loving town!!
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Date: 2/28/2023 3:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Smita, glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 1/8/2023 9:08:00 PM
I had to keep ‘round to read this.supen enjoyed this ! Didnt matter i i read it after the other. I all works together so very well! Give that poet a brew!
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Date: 1/8/2023 11:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Sally, I'm happy you enjoyed the story of Soup Creek. It was decided to rename the town to Milton Creek in Milt's honour. Tom
Date: 12/21/2022 7:50:00 PM
A fabulous insight to Soup Creek Tom in another great saga. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 12/22/2022 10:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Belle, watch this space there's more to come. Merry Christmas. Tom
Date: 12/21/2022 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Tom!
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Date: 12/21/2022 4:33:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Kim. Much appreciated. Tom
Date: 12/16/2022 8:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Tom:)
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Date: 12/16/2022 9:10:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Jo. Tom
Date: 12/16/2022 8:25:00 AM
HUGE CONGRATULATIONS ON the POTD HONOR BESTOWED UPON THIS MASTERPIECE OF A POEM, my dearest friend, Tom. God bless you!
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Date: 12/16/2022 10:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Demetrios I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations Marmite Man ….YEEHA!! so lovely to see your name up in lights once again for another entertaining, cleverly written soup creek tale….You are the master of wonderful Cowdy tales!! Debx
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Date: 12/15/2022 10:33:00 PM
Love me those cowdy boys YEEHA!! and the boss lady treats me mighty fine ha…..Debx
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Date: 12/15/2022 9:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Deb, big congrats to you as well saving our saloon from going bankrupt. Lol. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 7:38:00 PM
Great writer, Tom... Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 12/15/2022 9:19:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Eve, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 7:29:00 PM
Quite a fun read ! Glad to visit Soup Creek, the peace loving town and meet the Mayor Tom and his team. Let us have a gala get together there. :) Hope you won't allow that derelict woman to enter your premises ! :) Congratulations Tom on your POTD
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Date: 12/15/2022 9:18:00 PM
Thank you very much Valsa, everyone is welcome in our town, that derilct woman has disappeared, some say she was a witch, I must say she looked like one lol. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 3:14:00 PM
The Soup Creek saga continues with all of the fun and excitement of the Old West !! Who can resist being a part of this jovial bunch !! Another amazing episode dear Tom . Congratulations on POTD ! Hugs to you, Susan :)
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Date: 12/15/2022 9:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Susan. Joy gave way to sadness when I heard about Rico, I'll miss his humourous limericks and comments. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 2:17:00 PM
Awesome job Tom!! Congratulations on your POTD!!! I’m loving it.
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Date: 12/15/2022 9:13:00 PM
Thank you very much Mark, nice to see another unwelcome guest has now left town Good riddance I say. I'll buy you a drink in the saloon later. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 1:36:00 PM
Tom, you know life and have expressed it so well. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Date: 12/15/2022 1:51:00 PM
Thank you very much Warren, im happy you enjoyed the it. I Hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 1:00:00 PM
Your western yarn unwinds with a spirited dust whirling gallop and a sassy wink, can't wait for the mini-series! Congratulations on POTD Tom! Robert
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Date: 12/15/2022 1:06:00 PM
Thank you very much fior your congrats Robert, I'm happy you enjoyed the humour. After I wrote the first one many were inspired to write their own versions. Theres quite a few on here now. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 12:47:00 PM
You have painted another epic Old West saga of the colorful characters and friendly demeanor of Soup Creek in your inimitable style, Mayor Tom. Congrats on your POTD honour, and I hope your Christmas season is devoid of tumblin' tumbleweeds in your back 40 ~ John
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Date: 12/15/2022 1:04:00 PM
Thank you very much John, hope you are keeping well. I'm pleased that you enjoyed the continuing story of Soup Creek and hope the wind is blowing in our favour, I hope you too have a wonderful Christmas with your family. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on a well written potd
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Date: 12/15/2022 12:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Caren, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 12:23:00 PM
A very interesting town indeed! I see you got a POTD. Big Congrats, Tom.
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Date: 12/15/2022 12:27:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, never a dull moment in Soup Creek. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 11:41:00 AM
Tom, incredible and impressive writing, I love how you included so many wonderful soupers in your poem. Congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings
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Date: 12/15/2022 12:21:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Constance, Im happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Mayor Cunningham! Glad to be a part of Soup Creek! Yippy Kiay! whoa! Lol...I especially love the part about the derelict in an old shack--a crazy woman lives there! I have a surprise coming. ~Anaya :D
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Date: 12/15/2022 11:01:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Anaya, surprise?, I'm looking forward to it. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 10:33:00 AM
Fabulous cheeky fun poem! Congratulations on POTD Tom! xomo
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Date: 12/15/2022 10:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Maureen, I'm happy you enjoyed the humour. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 9:46:00 AM
Congrats on POTD - sounds like my type of town
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Date: 12/15/2022 10:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Terry, you'd be more than welcome. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun write/story. I really enjoyed this one. Merry Christmas...............
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Date: 12/15/2022 7:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula glad you enjoyed it. Merry Christmas to you too. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 6:49:00 AM
Fun read Tom. You so cleverly string those words together in rhyme! Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
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Date: 12/15/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Linda, I'm happy you enjoyed the humour. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 5:59:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Tom. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 12/15/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats and return visit Vijay, much appreciated. Hope you too have a good day. Tom
Date: 12/15/2022 5:52:00 AM
Wonderful Soup Creek story Tom, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/15/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Joseph glad you enjoyed it. Tom
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