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0, Vanishing Embrace

...thick clouds descend down, ...

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/4/2016 12:43:00 AM

Beautiful...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2016 11:32:00 PM

Labas vakaras Salamandra (my dad was Lithuanian) .beautiful haiku:-) hugs Jan xx

Ggg Bbb
Date: 3/5/2016 1:09:00 AM

your new Obsessive Orange made me to cross the line with writing my very first comment, indeed dudes were waiting for breakfast, so good to know how to deal with them:D

Ggg Bbb
Date: 3/5/2016 12:28:00 AM

O! Labas Jan, thank you! have found your CLOUDS HAIKU, it was your first one and #1:) this is also my very first one--- also with clouds-- nice coincidence) nice to meet you here! hugs xx