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the gray sky fell so many years ago, i spent years searching and dreaming- seems my purpose appeared very slow, now ease and inspiration beaming! lights without fear encompass me, a genuine gift my spirit guides sent- now i am living happy, joyous and free, doing what makes me happy and content i’m drowning in the kindness of friends, giving to those who need a warm smile- as my brilliant mind transcends into my own artistic creative style roads once blocked now i travel, no dam can hold me in the undertow- when all the stress of life begins to unravel, all the love inside my soul i shall bestow now I live a life too good to comprehend, all the sorrow turned dusk into morn- my radiant light has begun to ascend, for I am Laura… and I have been reborn ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ dedicated to turning 40 and having your dream come true.... 6.2.20 -Luloo

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John Watt

Date: 6/13/2020 4:08:00 PM

Life has a way of surprising us. Glad to see you enjoying your new reborn realities. You have brought joy into other people's lives, it is good to be able to sit and enjoy the dividends and the blessings. Hugs ~ John

Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2020 10:00:00 AM

thank you dear friend, I appreciate your kindness always. :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 6/11/2020 9:49:00 AM

Congratulations to one of my favorite poets!

Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2020 10:00:00 AM

awww thanks sweet sunlite- I miss you! :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2020 9:33:00 PM

Such a lovely way to come back Laura, glad you're posting again, you were missed, beautiful write! I barely remember 40, 60 in a few months ugh!

Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2020 10:01:00 AM

grey turns to yellow when surrounded in love....I told my sister that, she's almost 50. Thank you dear John, I miss you! Sorry for delayed response :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/3/2020 9:42:00 AM

Lu Loo, Nice beacon of light you lit in this poem. 'for I am Laura…and I have been reborn'. Welcome to the world Laura. -Richard

Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2020 10:02:00 AM

thank you dear Quoth TheRaven- life is good! Take care :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/3/2020 9:29:00 AM

Happy 40'th Lu...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2020 10:02:00 AM

thank you WW :) You are always the sweetest...:)

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/2/2020 7:28:00 PM

there is nothing more peaceful than to be at peace with yourself and the world you live in, 40 was a long time ago for me, 40 was good, really good, enjoy dear poet

Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2020 10:03:00 AM

thank you dear Frederic- I miss you! Take care and hope you are healthy and happy. Blessings :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/2/2020 2:50:00 PM

aww laura this is so beautifully uplifted, you have been on some rocky journeys in life but you have solid foundations with your Nick and Ella, so lovely to see you posting again and hope you had a wonderful birthday .. they say life begins at 40 - enjoy every minute:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 6/22/2020 10:00:00 AM

thank you sweet lady, sorry for delayed response- hope all is well :)