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Norman Crocker

Date: 7/18/2015 8:02:00 PM

Sounds like a childhoon nightmare!

Frank Polgar

Date: 12/3/2012 12:23:00 PM

The monster under the bed! Creepy, but I really like it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/3/2012 12:57:00 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Rollo West

Date: 11/9/2012 2:46:00 PM

Anne, I keep going back to this one to. High drama value, great write Rollo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2012 2:49:00 PM

You are always welcome Rollo. - Thank you. Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 11/4/2012 4:36:00 PM

I love this Anne ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/5/2012 2:04:00 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/1/2012 9:54:00 PM

Excellent piece,Anne Lise....Great job...and my heart stops. Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/2/2012 2:41:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations,and comments - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/1/2012 4:14:00 PM

Anne, congratulations in Tracie's fun "~Spooky Ku'~ contest. wishing you the best always :-) PD

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/1/2012 4:17:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations, PD - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/31/2012 3:53:00 PM

OoooOOooo...Spooky,spooky! With only a few words.. Very nice. :o) B00 oOOooOOooOoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2012 3:55:00 PM

Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Dan. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Orma Sullivan

Date: 10/31/2012 9:26:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise, Scary poem. Probably every adult can remember that as a child they believed that something scary lived under his or her bed. I know I did. I never let my foot dangle over the edge of the bed when I was young. You never know. Thanks for commenting on my poem., Who Am I. Much appreciated. I haven't been on Soup for several years. I joined back in 2007. I look forward to reading more of your work. All best, Orma Faye

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2012 10:59:00 AM

Yes, I often looked under the bed, I also as a child .... lol... Thanks for your visit and nice comments, welcome back. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/30/2012 5:47:00 PM

Oh Geeze..why did I read this before bed? lol. Congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/31/2012 1:45:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Barbara - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/30/2012 2:45:00 PM

Dear Anne Lise, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit I can relate to this masterful Haiku. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM Lonely Heart LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 3:39:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Harry - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 10/30/2012 2:47:00 PM

Congratulations on YOUR Contest Win...HG

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/30/2012 2:38:00 PM

ooooh! This is really scary, Anne Lise! Congrats on your fabulous win. Love, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 2:41:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Annalise - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2012 1:59:00 PM

another one I really like!! congrats for the win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 2:01:00 PM

Thanks for congratulations, Andrea - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/30/2012 10:20:00 AM

Big Congratulations to you my friend Anne Lise for winning Tracie’s “”Spooky Ku” contest. I'm scared that he is also under my bed tonight. lol!Happy Halloween!(^_^) hugs! Maria

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 11:13:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Maria - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 11:13:00 AM

Joseph May

Date: 10/30/2012 10:07:00 AM

congrats on a great win Anne..........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 11:12:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Joseph - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2012 8:10:00 AM

My biggest congratulations with biggest hugs on your win my dear friend, Anne-Lise! I'm so happy to see you on the winner's list! Best wishes and luck always! love, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 11:11:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Leonora- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem winning in Tracie's "Spooky Ku" contest Anne Lise BOOOO. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 7:21:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/30/2012 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your spooky ku win Anne Lise xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 2:36:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations, Mandy - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2012 12:31:00 AM

SUPER CONGRATS ANNE-LISE ON A TREMENDOUS SPOOKY KU WRITE AND WIN LUV FILLED WITH HALLOWEEN FLAVOR LUV ..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/30/2012 2:03:00 AM

Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 10/28/2012 4:22:00 PM

Great poem for halloween

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2012 4:28:00 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/28/2012 9:11:00 AM

Very scarey!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2012 10:34:00 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/27/2012 1:55:00 PM

That would make anyones heart drop and stop. ha ha love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2012 1:56:00 PM

Oh .... just a little mouse .... they're so cute :) Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2012 1:56:00 PM

Phyllis,thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/27/2012 12:33:00 AM

here's to wonderful saturday filled with a garden of glow, anne..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2012 3:13:00 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 10/26/2012 4:05:00 PM

Wow! This is really scary. I like it, I like it, Jancarl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2012 4:07:00 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller

Date: 10/26/2012 1:58:00 PM

A scary Halloween poemm thanks for sahring it, God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2012 2:20:00 PM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kaye S-

Date: 10/26/2012 9:44:00 AM

A chilling haiku, Anne Lise. Very timely for Halloween indeed. Thanks for passing by my poem with your kind words.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2012 11:27:00 AM

Thank you for reading my: Haiku XXX, - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)