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Silence ... deep ... overwhelming silence Your arduous journey ... - with fire and sulfur A hand to hold Words for comfort A cold cloth on your forehead Moisten your mouth - wipe your tears I will follow you to the gate - but you must go in alone The sleep of death Where your soul has now returned ... bottomless sorrow - at the deathbed I whispered goodbye ... "I love you a lot" R.I.P. Dad Born 1934 - died 2020 09/01/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Celine Rose Mariotti

Date: 3/5/2020 8:13:00 PM

Liked your poem. It was beautiful and poignant. My Dad passed away in May of 2011. I miss him a lot and write many a poem about him. He's always with me somehow. Celine Rose Mariotti

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/6/2020 4:45:00 AM

- I lost my mother in 2011 ... thinking of her every day ... now I said goodbye to my dad, Celine - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/18/2020 1:18:00 AM

Lovely poignant tribute, Sunshine. So touching.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2020 1:52:00 PM

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/17/2020 6:06:00 PM

So sorry for your loss, Anne-Lise. Praying for you and your family. *Bear Hug*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2020 1:51:00 PM

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/17/2020 3:47:00 PM

Such a sad, but beautifully written heartfelt goodbye to your dear Dad, Anne-Lise. I am so sorry for your loss- and I keep you in my prayers. Love and hugs, Sandra

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/18/2020 1:51:00 PM

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/17/2020 11:26:00 AM

So touching and heartfelt. My deepest sympathies to you and your loved ones great loss.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:35:00 PM

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/17/2020 3:45:00 AM

Condolences. Your memory and poem is powerful and so loving. Take good care, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:35:00 PM

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/17/2020 2:12:00 AM

The Lord is our great Comforter; and He is ready always, especially in our moments of loss. I'm praying for you. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:34:00 PM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2020 8:10:00 PM

This is SO heartfelt and well written, Anne Lise. He is smiling down at you and is so proud of you, dear. Sorry again for your great loss

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:34:00 PM

Constance La France

Date: 1/16/2020 5:19:00 PM

Anne-Lise, what a beautifully penned goodbye to your Dad, he will be waiting for you at the heavenly gate, and he will be watching over you every single day of your life, he lives on in your heart and memory, he is always with you _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:34:00 PM

Curtis Moorman

Date: 1/16/2020 9:31:00 AM

Sunshine Smile, and Dear Friend Anne-Lise, I host both parents, a brother who was younger than I, and a spouse. The joy, peace, and comfort that I have is solely based on my relationship with my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. I pray that you will find this same peace. Your poem is a comfort to me as I reflect on the good times I shared with them.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2020 12:34:00 PM

Eve Roper

Date: 1/15/2020 8:50:00 PM

As my tears flow feeling your sorrow.. may you be blessed with your dads peace "A hand to hold Words for comfort A cold cloth on your forehead Moisten your mouth - wipe your tears" He will always be close watching over you and your family … Hugs my dear friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:10:00 AM

Charles Messina

Date: 1/15/2020 8:16:00 PM

Anne-Lise, I am so very sorry to hear of the loss of your dad. My condolences to you and your loved ones. Sending prayers...R.I.P. dad Hugs Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:10:00 AM

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2020 7:30:00 PM

A beautiful heartfelt poem Anne-Lise, so very sorry for your loss, may your memories help comfort you at this difficult time.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:10:00 AM

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/15/2020 3:48:00 PM

Moving, touching, uplifting , a divine tribute to your father! I have already expressed my condolences my beloved friend, Anne-Lise. Tonight the Angel's will rejoice ! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:10:00 AM

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/15/2020 10:56:00 AM

So sorry about your loss. Poetic hugs could never be enough, but still I offer them.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:11:00 AM

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2020 3:56:00 AM

My heart felt for you dear soul sister. Your father has traveled forward as mine did 22 years ago. He has always been my guardian angel as will your dad be. Blessings, and hugs my dear friend. Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:11:00 AM

John Watt

Date: 1/15/2020 12:15:00 AM

I shed a tear with you. He was very lucky to have you by his side. His daughter's love is a testimony to his being a wonderful father. Keep writing, if that helps with the grieving process - it did for me. Sincere thanks for sharing, Anne-Lise. Big comforting hugs ~ John

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:11:00 AM

Joseph May

Date: 1/14/2020 5:25:00 PM

My deepest condolences on your loss Anne, I will have you in my prayers..hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:11:00 AM

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2020 3:38:00 PM

Sweetie, I'm so sorry to hear of your father's passing. At times like this, words cannot fully express our sympathy. When my Dad died, all his children and some of his grandchildren were there, but we do pass to the next world alone. That seems to be the scariest part. I can tell how much you love him, Sunshine. A beautiful tribute to your father! Love, carolyn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:12:00 AM

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/14/2020 12:05:00 PM

just stopped by to let you know i was thinking of you my friend... hugs and prayers...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:12:00 AM

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/14/2020 10:34:00 AM

I am so sorry for your loss. This is a very beautiful tribute to your father. My prayers are with you. God bless, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:12:00 AM

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2020 5:22:00 PM

I'm so sorry to hear about your loss... Your poem touched my heart... Reminded me about when I lost my father... My thoughts and prayers are with you...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2020 6:13:00 AM