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- Dancing On the Moon -

Fairy dance on the night moon The moon is half a shiny bow Resting on a dark blue velvet carpet Lingering in the shadows of passion I want to dance with the fairies in the night Sitting on top of the moon's arc Feeling the wind blow in my hair Looking down on everything that is at all worth seeing It is joy and delight in my eyes I hear the beautiful song ... it is the nightingale melody This is the place where I bring ... imagination wings A world there is room for everybody to live A world where no one needs to strive Then the tide can just come 12.12.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Amy Green

Date: 4/6/2014 8:16:00 AM

Gives a vision of a bunch of women dancing in the night (Druidistic?), like thisone a lot

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/6/2014 8:18:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment Amy. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chris G. Vaillancourt

Date: 1/19/2014 3:56:00 PM

Oh I really like this. It flows along nicely. I like your phrasing and the way you express yourself.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/19/2014 4:14:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment Chris. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nadarajah Kannappu

Date: 1/15/2014 12:18:00 PM

"A world there is room for everybody to live.." it's a wonderful poem..lovely.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/15/2014 12:22:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment Nadarajah. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Patricia L Graham

Date: 1/14/2014 7:22:00 AM

I have a sense there's so much more to this than what you've said in such an enchanting expression. Enjoyed and thanks for welcoming me.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2014 7:29:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comment Patricia. - your words are encouraging and supportive :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sameh Wahid

Date: 1/10/2014 1:24:00 PM

Awesome!! I love anything about the moon.. Listen to Mr. Moon for Jamiroquai.. xx Sameh

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2014 1:31:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Same - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Amanda Reslink

Date: 1/7/2014 2:42:00 PM

Very cute poem, I like the images...it has a soft whimsical flow to match

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/7/2014 2:47:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Amanda - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Fatima Ammar

Date: 1/5/2014 2:47:00 PM

This is delightful! I enjoyed it and the expressions very dreamy :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/5/2014 2:48:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Fatima - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/23/2013 10:40:00 PM

This poem could be my Xmas wish list!!! Great write!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/24/2013 1:55:00 AM

- Thank you, Arthur ! - HAPPY CHRISTMAS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/22/2013 2:34:00 PM

Hello Anne Lise I have missed conversing with you , I haven't been on for every it seems , I was taking some test/ classes ;} Love Debbie , Merry Christ mass my poet friend xo's Oh did I say this poem is awesome ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2013 2:47:00 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely Christmas greeting Debbie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 12/22/2013 12:03:00 AM

awesome... so beautiful <3 thank you deary sista Anne.. :) <3 wishing you happy Sunday <3 much luv and lights <3

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2013 6:30:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sukmawati - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2013 8:49:00 AM

this is gorgeous!! I really love it and I can't believe it is one i had somehow overlooked!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/21/2013 8:57:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments,Andrea - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paddi March

Date: 12/20/2013 5:51:00 PM

A very nice poem, there is music and dance in the Title alone "Dancing On The Moon" It feels very good and even hints at a similarity with my own "Alone" and the sly sudden introduction of a serious edge:- "A world there is room for everybody to live A world where no one needs to strive Then the tide can just come" i want that too.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/21/2013 6:55:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Paddi - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nicole Rodriguez

Date: 12/20/2013 5:24:00 PM

I thoroughly enjoyed the image that you immersed me in. It makes me appreciate the magic of the moon that captivated me as a child once again! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/21/2013 6:55:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Nicole - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/20/2013 1:16:00 AM

A lovely fantasy that carried me away. Will fav this one to read over. Hugs, SuZ

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/20/2013 2:49:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit,fav. and comments SuZ. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Madelin Barton

Date: 12/19/2013 10:57:00 AM

so beautiful the description and sentiments in this piece truly wonderful have a great day friend....xoxo Madelin

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/19/2013 11:38:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments Madelin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 12/17/2013 8:52:00 PM

Simply stunning. Your descriptions are so serene. Wishing you a joyous season :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/18/2013 3:44:00 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments Karen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Perry

Date: 12/17/2013 5:56:00 PM

Beautiful!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2013 6:51:00 PM

- A small and simple poetry - :)) - thanks for the nice visit Jennifer. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2013 3:41:00 PM

this is really lovely, Anne Lise. A good one to see you doing right before Xmas.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2013 3:45:00 PM

- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback,Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/17/2013 9:35:00 AM

Very beautiful imagination painted with sweet colorful words. Lovely done my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2013 10:23:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, bl my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/17/2013 7:37:00 AM

Such lovely images and thoughts in this one. Love it.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/17/2013 7:39:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Monterey my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/16/2013 8:30:00 AM

so delightful Anne Lise I love it Shadow x smile hug

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2013 8:31:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 12/16/2013 7:23:00 AM

I love the idea of dancing with the fairies. A lovely poem... My apologies for my silence lately... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2013 7:25:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Jack. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Kelley

Date: 12/16/2013 2:33:00 AM

very nice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2013 2:46:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, James. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/16/2013 1:37:00 AM

Good use of metaphors here! There is no atmosphere on the moon - so how can wind blow in your hair? I guess one can use "poetic license " here, I enjoyed this - and thank you for your kind words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/16/2013 1:39:00 AM

- Thank you for reading my thoughts / words - pleasant with your feedback, Matthew. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/14/2013 9:05:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise I thought that was you! The moon was brighter that night lol... I loved this. Thank you for writing it. My Best, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/15/2013 4:45:00 AM

- Highly appreciate your visit and your comments - Thank you, Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)