Zip

zing of waxwing zipping silence ~air tight flyby

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/25/2021 4:26:00 AM

From one bird lover to another, BRAVO Maureen, but from an ex postal worker so many birds have the same zipcode; the swallows and swifts being among some of my favorites. This haiku is now flying in my head. As always, a great poem Maureen, THANKS.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2021 9:06:00 AM

Few words with much said. Have a blessed day .....................

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/18/2021 10:36:00 AM

Thank you Paula! xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/10/2021 6:11:00 PM

'Zip' is a game of millimeters, alright.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/12/2021 10:21:00 AM

ooh, ouch! ;), xomo!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/5/2021 4:32:00 PM

Hello Maureen this is beautifully done. Enjoy y9ur evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2021 11:08:00 AM

Hello Maureen, yes I am having a nic weekend. thank you. I hope you are to. I like the way you express yourself. Enjoy your day my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/7/2021 5:41:00 AM

Thank you Darlene, I hope you have a lovely weekend! xomo

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/5/2021 3:10:00 PM

That's a ear-full Maureen . . . ; )

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/7/2021 5:41:00 AM

tee hee! ;), xomo!