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Zen Garden

Around beguiling courtyard dwell elegant flowers growing hither in joyous kindred loveliness moreover newly opened peonies quietly ripple softly to ubiquitous veritable winds xenial, yet zen. 11/7/2021

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/6/2021 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Zen Garden" sounds wonderful. A book with tea would be great. Have a great/blessed day................................

Laura Leiser
Date: 12/6/2021 7:13:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/19/2021 6:25:00 AM

Lovely, Laura! Congratulations!

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:32:00 PM

Thank you, Kim! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2021 12:00:00 PM

Beautifully written Laura, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:31:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! I hope you are feeling better! :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/18/2021 9:57:00 AM

Laura, this is definitely "zen" so beautifully expressed in soft tones of serenity. Congratulations on your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:31:00 PM

Thank you, Sam! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 11/17/2021 3:50:00 PM

Excellent Laura, good luck in the contest. A poet friend and follower, Bill

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2021 1:31:00 PM

Thank you, Bill! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2021 3:56:00 PM

this ended up being a real GEM. Congrats to you

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I’m glad you enjoyed this one! :)

Ann Peck

Date: 11/16/2021 3:05:00 PM

Awesome! Congratulations on your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Ann! :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/15/2021 11:33:00 PM

This is wonderful work. Congratulations!

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:23:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj! :)

Peter W Iversen

Date: 11/15/2021 9:44:00 PM

One can almost inhale the sweet fragrance. Very nice and well deserved win. Peter

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:23:00 AM

Thank you, Peter! :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 11/15/2021 9:39:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me virtually behold your garden. God bless you.

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2021 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Beata! I thank God for your sweet witness here at PS! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/15/2021 8:25:00 PM

Your zen garden is so graceful and soothing, a truly meditative feel, and the flow of words feels so natural it doesn't seem to be contrived - congratulations on your win~

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2021 8:50:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle! Glad you liked this! :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/15/2021 4:53:00 PM

Fantastic, Laura! Yours resemble a large jigsaw puzzle in preschool ... perfect easy fit's! I learned sensical decades later! My compliments on your placement in my contest, Aloha!

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2021 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement in your contest, William! It was a fun form to try, and I enjoyed reading the many creative entries in this form! :)

Terry Flood

Date: 11/15/2021 4:47:00 PM

A clever win, Laura. Congrats. Terry

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2021 5:26:00 PM

Thanks so much, Terry! :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2021 8:19:00 AM

I give you a big round of applause, Laura!! I love this 1 word per letter form which you used, and it is written with sense and apparent ease, too. ~ Best regards // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/13/2021 9:19:00 AM

Thank you, Paul! I’m so glad you liked it! :)