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Your Black Dress, Wow

My eyes were habituated to gaze, what they used to see is only your face. but yesterday, seeing you in that black dress. My innocent heart appeared to be in a mess. For me, you looked like a fairy, at time, I wrote my feelings in a diary. What a magic is there in your beauty, that usually put my mind soothe. So lucky was your black dress! having to your body a friction. Heating me with the fire of jealous, shown miracle that increased my addiction. -WRITTEN AND OWNED BY Amit Valmiki

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/3/2012 12:59:00 PM
nice write
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Date: 11/2/2011 8:24:00 PM
A lovely inspiring poem filled with beautiful diction and true sentiments of love! Thank you for sharing!
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