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Your Beauty Touched My Sky

When your beauty touched my sky the flowers bent my way engulfing me in a fragrance that I now know as you   The lilac and the lavender it moved around my soul bringing comfort to the romance begging to make our home   Wrap your arms around my kindness let your heart beat soft and free breathe into the sunshine in this dance of you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/26/2018 1:39:00 PM
Hello Tim, I enjoyed this rhyme. Have a nice day my friend. I also see this poem as a love poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/27/2018 7:01:00 PM
One cannot help but smile at your caressing words Tim :)
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Date: 3/23/2018 11:28:00 AM
Dear Tim, I love this charming, romantic piece that comes from the heart of a true lover - so touching and lovely! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 3/23/2018 9:22:00 AM
- So sweet and romantic, Tim :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/23/2018 6:32:00 AM
I love the title and absolutely love the poem. Beautifully romantic!!! I fave it!
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Date: 3/23/2018 6:30:00 AM
You've got the magic Timmy
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Date: 3/23/2018 4:04:00 AM
Good Morning Tim I hope this day finds you well. I very much enjoyed your smooth romantic entry. I found it gentle with imagery.
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:27:00 PM
LOVE-ly words! :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 6:49:00 PM
Beautifully romantic Tim. Nicely done.
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Date: 3/22/2018 5:07:00 PM
aww so beautiful and romantic a joy to read Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:58:00 PM
Oh, this is perfect Tim. And a favorite too! :)
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