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You Are Not Defined By

What to expect...Many others do tell... shaping lives into a mold of how it is they feel... Seemingly harmless but still a doubt creates Now facing yourself's reflection of who it is they've made Pulling down the crows feet smoothing out the old age Splashing water in drops that weep, raining down cascades Breath held difficultly deep, releases with so much pain Eyes open almost complete to stare at your new face Re-start with all the little things wash, brush, and shave Believing begins with belief in the person that you've made Heart racing into upbeat, excited to face the day Realizing the pasts lies, you are not defined by what they say...
12/20/18
Placed 3rd in Contest Results

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Date: 12/29/2018 9:35:00 AM
Hi Brian, I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/29/2018 2:33:00 PM
Thank you so much
Date: 12/29/2018 9:12:00 AM
Enjoyed this very much Brian, congrats on a fine win!
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/29/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thank you John

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