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In the arena of wrath, patience takes hold. A silent predator, waiting to unfold. With icy breath and a frozen heart, Revenge embarks on its chilling art. The thawed memories of a bitter past Linger in the shadows, refusing to be cast. But time, my friend is a cunning foe. It knows how to mend and let blow. Patiently, it weaves its intricate design, Akin to a spider spinning a web divine. It waits for the idyllic moment to strike. To cast justice on those who inflicted the spike. The hours turn to days, the days to years, As revenge simmers, fueled by silent tears. But vengeance is a dish best-served cold. And time ensures that God sees it all unfold.
Written: June 15, 2023

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Date: 6/16/2023 6:53:00 PM
I steadfastly believe what you say. Revenge is for fools and always has a price to pay. No matter how the hurt, time will eventually heal, if you take steps to be happy again. Knowing that justice will eventually come to those that inflicted the pain. An enlighten poem, superb in every way.
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Date: 6/15/2023 10:18:00 PM
Beautiful stream of thoughts. Wrath is a silent predator, but patience and forgiveness are powerful to make this predator defenceless and impotent. Beautiful poem dear Lasaad.
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Date: 6/15/2023 2:46:00 PM
Wow. Absolutely love this Lasaad. Every evil deed will be responded by God's judgement. In due time that is. This one is a favorite. Excellent theme...
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Date: 6/15/2023 1:44:00 PM
Very depthful and full of introspection, this one! I really loved all the images; sharp!
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