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Woven

Timeless abiding - Moments of silky threads hold- Our hearts in one string Inspired by Raul’s “Sentiments of the heart contest”!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/16/2010 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Laura in Raul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:07:00 AM
A very heartfelt Senryu on the symbol of oneness. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Laura. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:48:00 PM
Liked the imagery in this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/13/2010 6:14:00 PM
Beautifully done, this one. Congratulations, Laura!
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on your placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/13/2010 3:25:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your winning poem and placement in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy .. and a well deserved trip to the winners circle ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/13/2010 2:59:00 PM
Laura, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 3/5/2010 1:32:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting view. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Have a nice weekend. Karen
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:12:00 PM
Lovely Senryu Laura..good luck in the contest.. beautiful sentiments to read.. loving... my entry is Hallowed Hearts.. thankxxx for your comments on my poetry today... so appreciated..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/4/2010 8:11:00 AM
This is beautiful, Laura. I see the eternal circle of love displayed in the wedding band. Excellent entry for the contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:24:00 AM
Oh wow! This is a beauty, Laura! This should do well in the contest, indeed! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/4/2010 12:35:00 AM
So simply beautiful. Farah
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Date: 3/3/2010 11:00:00 PM
Very well written Senryu, Laura! Great choice of words to express sentiments. Good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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