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Worth the Wait - Sg

Checking my watch one last time Waiting for your face Looking down the corridor Just an empty space... Now you're five years late You're never coming back, but You're still worth the wait 6/15/2021

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/10/2021 5:29:00 PM

This is so wistful, longing tinged with hope, very effective write, congratulatins on your placement~

Avery Won
Date: 7/12/2021 4:30:00 AM

Thank you Michelle :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/9/2021 10:04:00 PM

WoW! Good one! Wish someone waited for me like that. Congratulations

Avery Won
Date: 7/12/2021 4:30:00 AM

Thank you :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/9/2021 8:42:00 PM

Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Avery Won
Date: 7/12/2021 4:30:00 AM

Thank you so much

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/9/2021 8:28:00 PM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.

Avery Won
Date: 7/12/2021 4:30:00 AM

Thank you Beata!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/9/2021 8:03:00 PM

Ah! The pining heart!

Avery Won
Date: 7/12/2021 4:29:00 AM

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/9/2021 5:05:00 PM

A humorous piece, Avery, remarkably done rhythmically, as well as, phonetcally. Thank you for your participation and honorable placement my friend, Aloha!

Avery Won
Date: 7/12/2021 4:29:00 AM

Ty for the placement :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/15/2021 10:43:00 AM

Tightly-written, lovely sentiment, Avery. I enjoyed it so much.

Avery Won
Date: 6/15/2021 11:18:00 AM

Thank you :)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/15/2021 10:15:00 AM

What a love. Rarely seen!

Avery Won
Date: 6/15/2021 11:18:00 AM

Thank you!