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Wonderland In Whiteness

"Wonderland in Whiteness" Whiteness is the fairest color of flawless perfection a vibrant tapestry of Creation's affection a masterpiece of beauty; pure as a sinless soul a delicate crafting, so intimate, a treasure of wondrous whole. bright magical color of purity and grace an infinite vision swirling in chantilly lace fluffy couds floating in marshmallow montage' with a canvas of stars twinkling in a heavenly collage'. slow gentle spiral of snowflakes escaping from skies while white essence of dove feeding lost lovers cries as those White Cliffs of Dover reflect cresting waves and mountain peaks slumber, caressing Sun, craves. the brilliant Hope Diamond sparkles white glimmer the Camelot Era revels in White Knight shimmer as street lanterns illuminate glow, effervescent, young hearts inhale breathless love, luminescent. Whiteness welcomes the depth and the breath of soft fabric as positive vibes infiltrate as sheer magic while Planets of Earth weave a web of delight all humanity extols the Heavenly White Knight the Light of the World whose persona shines white. *For Anthony Slauson's Whiteness Contest. *Oct. 3, 2012

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Date: 3/13/2014 2:55:00 AM
beauty in every line...SKAT
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Date: 12/3/2012 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Anthony's "Whiteness" contest Linda. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2012 8:36:00 PM
WON 5TH PLACE ... THANKXXX
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:55:00 PM
This is a beauty, makes one wish for a soft and lovely chill of snow, and paints the glittering scene just in time for Christmas!
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Date: 12/1/2012 3:36:00 PM
Linda, this is an inspired poem, It makes a beautiful statement and is fantastical in imagery! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:12:00 PM
Gorgeous write! Congratulations on a great win :)
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Date: 11/30/2012 11:56:00 AM
Linda my bff, congratulations with your awesome win,, always~pd
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Date: 10/10/2012 1:59:00 PM
Such a lot of good content here Linda-Marie.." I anticipate you getting a well earned spot with This beauty..!
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Date: 10/8/2012 5:57:00 AM
Lovely Piece JG... you are on a roll with some amazing poetry... so proud... My last poem is still there, I just recieved a comment on it from Wilma.. check again when you have a chance.."My Dripping Pen".... love always Michael Giants CRUZZZZZZZZZZZ....
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Date: 10/4/2012 10:07:00 PM
So beautifully pure write:)
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Date: 10/4/2012 2:17:00 PM
so rich in imagery with lines of wonderful poetry to read and fill me with light and awe, sweets!.. great expressionism!.. a winner!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/4/2012 12:35:00 PM
Wonderland of whiteness, well woven, Linda.
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Date: 10/4/2012 11:52:00 AM
lovely entry for the contest Linda Marie, it should place well
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Date: 10/4/2012 10:24:00 AM
An awesome write Linda Marie as beautiful as always. love phyl
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Date: 10/4/2012 9:49:00 AM
This is so true Linda, white is the masterpiece of beauty..thank you for your beautiful share..congratulation for the contest..Bravo!!! <3<3<3 :) SK
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Date: 10/4/2012 9:27:00 AM
Linda, my bff...i love the way you pulled of this contest...i have no idea what this contest is about... good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 10/4/2012 9:11:00 AM
A work that points to the coming King..The White Knight that we have all be longing to return..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..My work wasn't for Nette's contest just inspired to write it..I think that I am going through a dry spell..It happens sometimes..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:35:00 AM
I think you about covered it all my friend! All the white things in one accord here! I wonder if you left anything for me to write about...ha ha, you've done masterfully with this incredible poem! I am quite impressed with this wondrous write, you have brought delight to me just by me reading this poem! I really enjoyed your grandiose piece that I've read this morning, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:15:00 AM
white is the perfect color as it represents so many lovely things so enjoy poets .. the finished product now ..luv
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:12:00 AM
Absolutely love this poem!...it reads soooo smooth.
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:09:00 AM
Wow..Such a beautiful poem on whiteness Linda!Love this very much.
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:07:00 AM
Yes,first here!!
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