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Wonderful Worthing Promenade Part 1

Five miles of neatly spaced suckered palm planted Bustling promenade, Not withstanding a provincial cafe-culture Of restaurants and exciting little bars, Enhance upon regal elegance of the crammed hotels Regency period style facades; Their fashionable shadows slowly lifting and slowly falling Across the lines of deferentially, slowly moving cars. Trundling on down Marina Parade, Some, perhaps, making their way onto Brighton road: Day trippers and boisterous holiday makers for Lancing, Shoreham and the other side of Hove. Happy lovers, sedentary couples, retired gentlemen casually dressed In their slacks and checked tweeds, Kids with plastic spades and empty buckets; Strolling parents pulling back hard on taut leads - wrestling with overly excited, barking hounds of all types and all breeds. Boastful flat Georgian roofs and ionic columns of dazzling lilacs, Primrose and purest whites... Oh what marvelously pleasing lines of sublime English Riviera - Greek revival delight. Pediments, decorative cornice, dormiers, bracketed balconies... And dare i say: just a touch of Queen Anne? Town of exquisite par excellence - so perfectly genteel - So spick and so span! Long gone: The Dragoons, the smugglers, the looters, the wreckers And hoarders; Now out in the Channel: Bathers, windsurfers, and sailors Brave the crested waves of warming blue waters. Long gone: The boatbuilders, the fishing smacks, the old salts Who wound upon these rusting Capstans that hauled the steel hawsers; Trapped within shimmering mirages, just hazy distortions That confuse and bewilder: The spotter, the tourist, the after-lunch walkers. Elegant Pavilion Theatre, crowned with Mansard liken lead dome roofs, Aesthetically combine As grandest frontage to your magnificent Victorian pier Of eighteen sixty one: Stream-Line - Art Deco design. Wailing gulls, screaming at crashing rollers, tumble over and over Beneath cloudless days, Aligning on smooth painted rails held proudly aloft - Iron legs running defiantly out into Britannias ruling waves. Frothing Spumes teasing with Golden curls frolic atop Of the grey speckled foams, That stooping, scoop up and scatter upon a pebbled beach: With ancient Coombe rock, polished flints and rattling multicoloured stones. Slatted timber Groynes and revetments sympathize Amidst the wretched sands forlorn, despairing groans; Longshore drifts incessant lap, lap, lap, lullaby drowning out An objectionable, long-suffering coastlines mournful, ill-fated undertones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/25/2019 3:36:00 AM
great poetic expression
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Date: 11/25/2016 10:45:00 AM
Dear John Thank you very much for your poem, I really enjoyed it, I am currently putting a book together called we love Brighton & Hove. our book Features local poets from the Sussex area, I was wondering if you would allow us to include your work. Also, if you have any other similar works we would be really interested. Any profits from the book will be donated to a local charity. Please contact me at terrygodwin7@gmail.com Kind Regards Terry Terry Godwin The Laughing Poet
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John Fleming
Date: 12/10/2016 4:09:00 PM
Terry, firstly, allow me to apologize for the delay in answering your very kind and generous remarks; I work for the Royal Mail, and, as you can imagine, it is nothing short of organised chaos at this very moment! Of course I would be delighted and honoured if you should want to include my poem in any publication you see fit. May I suggest you take at look at another couple of my poems: "The new Bypass", and..."Grand residential old Worthing town". So very nice to become acquainted, Terry! All my very best...And my warmest regards! :) john
Date: 4/18/2015 4:38:00 AM
Your way with words enchants the soul. This piece is so impressive I can't wait to read the second part John. Outstanding!
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:33:00 PM
Hi, Connie. Hope you are well...its good to see you visiting again! Thank you ever so much for your lovely comments! Best regards!! :) john.
Date: 4/4/2015 6:45:00 AM
The images you've captured here, the way you introduced history, what a masterful write. I'll have to go and finish it... Oh and Happy Easter.
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Date: 4/4/2015 3:12:00 PM
Many thanks, Scott! Allow me to wish you a very happy Easter as well!! Best regards!! :) john.
Date: 4/1/2015 4:07:00 PM
You are a stupendous writer John! I love your work, brilliant!
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:12:00 PM
Good to see you back amongst friends, Armand. You are always very welcome here. My very best regards!! :-) john.
Date: 4/1/2015 2:57:00 PM
What can I say, John! This is beautiful; the imagery captivating; your keen eye hovering from one lovely view to another. You paint a giant picture that appeals to the senses; offering the present while taking a look at the past. Hope that this Sussex town will not fall prey to extreme commercial demands! #7 // paul
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! I am always pleased to see you paying me a visit; I appreciate your kind and generous comments! My very best regards!! :-) john.
Date: 3/31/2015 10:14:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. An absolute delight to read with a mystical flowing cadence that welcomes the experience, and ends with a smile. I am captured by the images so skillfully developed by the author. Emile
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Date: 4/1/2015 5:47:00 AM
Your kind comments are much appreciated, Emile! Many thanks - Best regards!! :) john.
Date: 3/29/2015 10:02:00 AM
I so agree with Kim's comment below mine. I could not have said it better. You are the soup travelogue writer!!
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Date: 3/29/2015 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I accept this honorary title you have both bestowed upon me with great pride and affection! My best regards!! :) john.
Date: 3/27/2015 11:22:00 AM
You have signed yourself into being the travelogue writer for your land, dear John. A reader feels he/she is right there, looking at the same pictures you have described. Such vivid imagery. A 7. Keep writing! Kim :)
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Date: 3/28/2015 6:50:00 AM
Hello, Kim. Its good to see you visiting again once more - I hope you are keeping well! Many thanks for your kind comments. Best regards!! :) john.
Date: 3/26/2015 12:27:00 PM
Description has found its soulmate in you, John! Julia, xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 12:40:00 PM
Why thank you, Julia! That is very sweet of you. best regards! :) john.
Date: 3/25/2015 4:27:00 PM
wow if this is part one I cant wait for part 2 - amazing imagery I can picture this so vividly in my head - a 7 from me:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 2:14:00 AM
Jan, thanks for the visit and kind remarks - i am most grateful! My best regards!! :) john.

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