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W hen twilight lingers over grassy hill, O n shimmering blue waters grand and still. N othing as lovely as a quiet haze, D ancing among an evergreen tree maze. E vening stars begin to emit their shine, R ed the firmament, clouds of purple wine. F ind a tranquil rest to solemnly breathe, U nder heaven’s canopy on cool eve; L oving all the beauty God did so leave. Copyright © 2016 By Caryl S. Muzzey 1/5/16 Third Place Winner ~ "Wonderful-Acrostic" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton Feb.03, 2016

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Date: 1/25/2016 9:50:00 PM
CARYL, THANK YOU for THE ON MY reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! LINDA
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/26/2016 7:30:00 PM
You're welcome Linda, back atcha~ Caryl
Date: 1/23/2016 12:07:00 AM
CARYL, Congratulations on your Wonderful-Acrostic win. Hugs --Linda--
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/23/2016 8:37:00 PM
Thank you Linda, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ Caryl
Date: 1/13/2016 7:33:00 PM
One of the very best. BIG congrats.
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/14/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, for stopping by, glad you enjoyed it...
Date: 1/13/2016 12:57:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning work Caryl!!
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/14/2016 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Upma, for stopping by...
Date: 1/12/2016 11:46:00 PM
Carly,, Congrats on your Wonderful-Acrostic. ** SKAT **
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/14/2016 10:33:00 AM
Thank you SKAT, for stopping by ~CARYL~
Date: 1/12/2016 10:19:00 PM
Caryl. Sorry, need a new keyboard :)
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/14/2016 10:32:00 AM
Me too...
Date: 1/12/2016 10:18:00 PM
A nice piece, Caro#yl, very restful and calming. Well done! Viv x
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/14/2016 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Vi#v, for stopping by ~Caryl~ x
Date: 1/12/2016 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations Caryl on your well-deserved placement! :) Hope you the best all throughout.
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/12/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thank you Hansteven.
Date: 1/12/2016 6:38:00 AM
What a great acrostic Caryl not familiar with your writing but will check it out! 37/40 next time double check spelling would have scored higher.
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/12/2016 10:49:00 AM
John, thank you for the placement in your contest, I enjoyed the challenge. I checked the spelling a 1000 times and never saw the misspelled word; then I rechecked 4 more times after the contest and found it. Sorry about that... I enjoyed the challenge~ Caryl
Date: 1/9/2016 1:27:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..It has a great flow, rhythm and rhyme..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/12/2016 10:52:00 AM
Thank you Sara, thanks for stopping by... Caryl
Date: 1/6/2016 8:37:00 PM
you did a wonderful job with that theme!
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/7/2016 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, you are hard to compete with but I still try...

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