Wonder

i wonder what would happen... if i told you my true feelings... or at least admitted them to myself... then maybe i could live my life...the way i want to live it... i wonder what would happen... if you admitted the feelings you had for me... if there are actual feelings for me... i sit and think about what would happen... i want us to be together... and no one to be critical... no one to get in our buisness... and let us be happy... cuz i think we can be happy together... but you have to give it a chance... then i wake up... and i realize that all i dream about is...you... all i think about is...you... all i want is...you... but...i thought i was supposed to love someone else... i cant get you out of my wandering mind...

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/9/2011 2:52:00 PM

A role model, well thats a first...lol.. Soup Mail my dear...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/8/2011 2:08:00 PM

Lizzy my dear Angel... There is no one in this life that doesn't feel and wonder just like you. A good part of my life I did just that.. I hope Im wiser now but I try to think things out before jumping..In the case of love , darling you have to follow your heart, I know easire said then done.. But in time it will make up who you are .. I hope that helped.. For an example of my indecisions read Sprng In winter.. Love you friend forever Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/4/2011 4:39:00 PM

Very creative and interesting write on wonder, Elizabeth

Katie Livingston

Date: 2/4/2011 10:43:00 AM

aww...beth...that is so good!! you always did come up with amazing poems i love ya sissy!! <3 ~kayte-boo~

Adam Ferguson

Date: 2/4/2011 10:37:00 AM

its a really good poem. just try to back down on some of the periods.