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The eyes The eyes so piercing Looking through you as if You were some object Of her anger, or excitement Inside her clasped hands Is her mouth, unknown Is what is going on there Spite? Joy? Fear? Seemingly she escapes The plea of being Alone, as she implies You are seen And her emotion Is geared towards you Her hands look Like scales of a fish Leading you more to wonder What exactly is there Her hair dyed, to accompany Her mood But doesn’t reveal The exact emotion Of her mouth in hiding Looking at you She desires something from you But what is it? What does she want? Poems that paint a picture contest - Silent One 12 September 2017

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Date: 9/13/2017 7:51:00 PM
Congratulations Russell on your win with this wonderful poem! :)
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:56:00 AM
Congrats Russell!
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:29:00 AM
Thoughtful poem and an interesting interpretation of the painting.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/12/2017 6:41:00 PM
Russell, wonderfully penned for the contest, Best of luck
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Date: 9/12/2017 2:35:00 PM
- Nobody knows what feelings she's hiding, Russell - Great written - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:26:00 AM
Well done, Russell, the imagery is wonderful, who can tell what is behind those clasping hands, fear, joy, or surprise... luck in the contest.... And thank you so very much for your comment on my poem .... Hugs dear friend ~`*
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:45:00 AM
Very well written Russell. You have described the mystery in this picture! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 9/12/2017 6:48:00 AM
Love the way you depicted the painting Russell--she is full of intrigue--so well described in you poem!
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