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I wrote this for the love of my life. Not trying to say how beautiful she is, but just how much I need her. Rough draft and a five minute write. I'm sure I will edit and change a lot, but wanted to post as is for now. Thnx for reading. Please leave feed back.

Life without you Has no dreams to come true Without you, Life carries no tune Without you, I'm cold and roaming alone Without you, I've no place that's a home But when you walk in the room and you whisper my name My dreams come to life And the song plays again I can live . . . I can live . . . I'm alive . . . Without you, There's no gleam in my eye Without you, I have no reason why Without you, I am nothing at all and I can't even crawl Without you, I haven't a heart beat at all Without you, I am simply slowly dying There's not a melody there's not a rhyme, But when you walk in the room and you whisper my name My dreams come to life And the song plays again I can live . . . I can live . . . I can see . . . Your love gives meaning to me I can breathe . . . I can breathe . . . There's no mystery hidden from me, I can touch I can feel With you there's no place in my heart that's not healed When you whisper my name My dreams come to life And the song plays again I can live . . . I can live . . . Yet you ask nothing from me With one look from your eye I can breathe . . . I can breathe With you I am finally free I can live . . . I can live . . . I can breathe With you I can clearly see Everything I'm meant to be And with you that's good enough . . . For me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/14/2016 4:33:00 AM
Nicely put together, I appreciate your heart felt words. I suck at love type poems; LOL. Thanks for the inspiration-Chris...
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Date: 2/2/2015 3:04:00 AM
A beautiful song...
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